Dondril - Dialogue

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  • In Development

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Dialogue for Dondril – Progress can be followed in the link below:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/15AuX4D7FZ6kcGQ-Zcje8stEXbw9wogzOrfafiCIcnWI/edit?usp=sharing

Comments

I would merge the last two

Terrifying Daedric Foe's picture

I would merge the last two sentences of the Hadrumnibibi rumour to say: “The hetman is looking to ask our lord’s guards to burn them out, but the witchhunter Galor Sothro is talking about scouting out the old shrine himself.”

Would people refer to themselves as ”peasants”? Perhaps ”common folk” instead?