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ShoGun
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18 Dec 2004
Location: Sadly enough, Infront of my computer in Sweden, Bålsta.
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Just a little tower I scetched and fixed with in ps.
I named it rihad first, but I'm not sure it's the right architecture.
It's not a pro drawing I was just bored 
PS version:
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/5907/towerone0sj.jpg
Scetch:
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/3568/rihadtowerorginal1af.jpg
Constructive criticism please
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Wed Mar 29, 2006 5:05 pm
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Macar
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27 Jan 2005
Location: Yellow
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Not a bad drawing. But you are right in thinking it dosent match Rihad architecture (or at least what we think rihad will look like).
In the future, you could provide multiple views. Also, you might want to come up with a more specific context- Just giving us a general tower without telling us what culture it belongs to, or anything isnt as helpful.
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Wed Mar 29, 2006 5:10 pm
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ShoGun
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18 Dec 2004
Location: Sadly enough, Infront of my computer in Sweden, Bålsta.
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Well, That is what I don't know. I just drew it.
Redoran-ish. But I could try and make a smiliar tower later and do a little bit more details
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Wed Mar 29, 2006 5:36 pm
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Macar
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27 Jan 2005
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Well what I was trying to say is that it's the "idea" that makes the difference between a drawing and a concept art piece.
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Wed Mar 29, 2006 6:35 pm
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ShoGun
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18 Dec 2004
Location: Sadly enough, Infront of my computer in Sweden, Bålsta.
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Ah, ok
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Wed Mar 29, 2006 7:37 pm
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Morgoth
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22 Aug 2005
Location: That big place next to the smaller place with the tree.
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Well, It's a good design, if you are going for a functional design, but if you want to make it atmouspheric, try adding shading and a defined light scource. Believe me, it works.
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Wed Mar 29, 2006 8:03 pm
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ShoGun
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18 Dec 2004
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Thx, I'll get on it as soon as I can
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Thu Mar 30, 2006 1:29 pm
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Lutemoth
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10 Dec 2005
Location: Null Zero, manifest
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The building shows a very stylized characteristic, and shows promise. Like Macar said, it doesn't fit well with Rihad, but it's good in gaining artistic ground in presentation
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Fri Mar 31, 2006 7:59 pm
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