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i3-34-Ind

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Claim type: Interior
Claim ID: TR_i3-34-Ind (#525)
Faction: Indoril
Parent claim: TR_3-16-Ind (#120)
Claimed by: Parted User
Status: Not Available (Progress: 100%)
Location: 1:(3022, -3840):0
Files: TR_i3-34-Ind_Arthmodeus_1.esp; TR_i3-34-Ind_Lady Nerevar_1.esp; TR_i3-34_ART.esp

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Almalexia, Triffith Sandril Plaza, (23,-30)
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Post by Sload »

(Overall)
-Cleaned with TESAME
-Matches Exterior
-Lighting is to bright, use the same one the Mournhold interiors used
-Needs to be illegal to sleep here
-All of these lights are common lights. Replace them with de_ ones
-Needs a north marker

(First Floor, Entry Room)
-Furn_De_r_Table_09 bleeds with rug and Furn_De_R_Bookshelf_02 floats. The solution is remove the rug, move the rug, or make the rug large enough that both peices of furniture are on it
-Replace "36 Lessons of Vivec, Sermon 32"s on the shelves with another Indoril-type book
-Replace de_p_chest_02_gold_50 with a rich chest
-bookskill_medium armor5 should be replaced with a non-skill Indoril book
-What if you moved bk_HouseOfTroubles_o to the table to replace bookskill_medium armor5 and put a guard ledger type of thing on the table?

(First Floor, Main Room)
-In_MH_door_02 floats
-Every chair and table bleeds
-Scrip Jerky doesn't fit in the plates
-Both Tables are empty
-Why is the table further in messed up?
-Could you have varied the crate_01_foods with some other kind of chest?

(Second Floor)
-This room could use some more chests and things for detail.
-furn_de_rug_big_04 should be moved so that the wardrobe doesn't bleed with it

(Third Floor)
-Mazte on the table looks out of place, remove three of them
-I suggest you hold this interior until Equipment of Tamriel is ready so that you can spread some Chuzei armor around.
-furn_de_r_table_08, and both furn_de_r_chair_03s float

I give it a 7 and it should be included if all the errors are fixed.
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Review:
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Post by Arthmodeus »

Submitted and fixed.
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Post by Lady Nerevar »

wow, that was fast. thanks arth!

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Post by Swiftoak »

The Review:

REVIEW ON INTERIOR 3-34:

I. TEASME: CLEAN

II. LOADING: No Problems whatsoever.

III. GENERAL/LOGIC/LIGHTING: The correct syntax for cell naming is just plain 'i3-37'. No TR and ART is required.

IV. THE MAIN REVIEW:

i. Bottom Floor:
-The Deeshan Bread still floats ontop of the table.
-Cookie bleeds into plate.
-Goblet bleeds into table.
-Both tables still need some detail.
-Shelves in the second room need some detail.

ii. Second floor with the beds:
-Not so bad here, but maybe switch the beds to de_r, since the cabinet is de_r.

iii. Top floor:
-Everything in order here, just detail the tables and add a railing to those stairs.

V. CONCLUSION: Very well fixed, but I think you ovelooked the mistakes on the bottom floor. The other floors only need some detailing. Re-fix bottom floor, detail, and this can be merged.

FINAL RATING: 7.5/10, A little more needed before TR.
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Bump.
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Post by Massalinie »

Can a reviewer please be assigned to this?
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Post by Thrignar Fraxix »

TESAME: Clean

Fits exterior: Yes



Northmarker set: Yes
Loading errors: No



Review: Light_De_Candle_24 was bleeding
bk_Anticipations was floating
Furn_de_rug_big_01 was floating
de_r_chest_01_gold2 needed to be locked
TR_a_ind_cuirass was floating
bk_LivesOfTheSaints wasn't resting right
2nd floor:
probably should be a balcony on this staircase, however I can't seem to get it to work.
No Snap to grid...
Inexplicable doorjam deleted


Comments FIXORD (yes, I fixed the entire int)

Rating 10/10 (Arth recieves a 0 for the day)
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Post by Gesshoku »

TESAME: Clean

Fits exterior: Yes



Northmarker set: Yes
Loading errors: No



Review: N/A

Comments I didn't see anything that needed to be fixed, good int

Rating 10/10
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Post by Lady Nerevar »

approving, top file
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Post by Aeven »

Revoking for repurposing.
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