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This interior is beginning to shape up nicely. You fixed the windows; that is good. However, after thinking about the fireplace somewhat, I figured it is a bit out of place, and it is also disproportionately large, considering the size of the tiny interior. If you are going to include a fireplace, please make sure that it blends into the interior, so no bulky, dark, uneven shapes like the ones you used. (Not to mention that the pieces you used would be invisible until you finished part of the Raven Rock questline, since they're stage-dependent.) It should also be somewhat smaller. You could also consider cutting it out altogether, since there is already a fireplace outside, if I remember correctly.
I'm not really sure about the way you blend the de_bar into the walls. I've seen vanilla do it here and there, but I believe the outlines of the bar should be left intact. It could easily be replaced with just furn_de_bar_02 and furn_de_bar_04. Something along these lines. https://www.dropbox.com/s/u3uwxniyi9x5cwt/Bar.jpg
So I'll recommend this be sent back for fixing, but this is mostly due to esthetics. Also, check for any leftover placement and rotation errors you might've missed.
I'm not really sure about the way you blend the de_bar into the walls. I've seen vanilla do it here and there, but I believe the outlines of the bar should be left intact. It could easily be replaced with just furn_de_bar_02 and furn_de_bar_04. Something along these lines. https://www.dropbox.com/s/u3uwxniyi9x5cwt/Bar.jpg
So I'll recommend this be sent back for fixing, but this is mostly due to esthetics. Also, check for any leftover placement and rotation errors you might've missed.
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Tea is important! - Cathartis
Tea is important! - Cathartis
Hey sasquatch. I've just quoted what Jule said, in case you can't read it for some weird forum bug reasonJule wrote:This interior is beginning to shape up nicely. You fixed the windows; that is good. However, after thinking about the fireplace somewhat, I figured it is a bit out of place, and it is also disproportionately large, considering the size of the tiny interior. If you are going to include a fireplace, please make sure that it blends into the interior, so no bulky, dark, uneven shapes like the ones you used. (Not to mention that the pieces you used would be invisible until you finished part of the Raven Rock questline, since they're stage-dependent.) It should also be somewhat smaller. You could also consider cutting it out altogether, since there is already a fireplace outside, if I remember correctly.
I'm not really sure about the way you blend the de_bar into the walls. I've seen vanilla do it here and there, but I believe the outlines of the bar should be left intact. It could easily be replaced with just furn_de_bar_02 and furn_de_bar_04. Something along these lines. https://www.dropbox.com/s/u3uwxniyi9x5cwt/Bar.jpg
So I'll recommend this be sent back for fixing, but this is mostly due to esthetics. Also, check for any leftover placement and rotation errors you might've missed.
I think it looked better with the fireplace which i have now removed. It is a shame I was not told sooner about the fireplace as it has been in since the beginning in various revisions. I replaced said fireplace with a table that has a big rat on it and another butcher station. If things are not in order I ask that the file be kept, but someone else finish it out as I am tired of looking at it.
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