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Claim type: Interior
Claim ID: TR_i3-249-Ind (#549)
Faction: Indoril
Parent claim: TR_3-16-Ind (#120)
Claimed by: Parted User
Status: Not Available (Progress: 0%)
Location: 1:(2883, -3370):0
Files: TR_i3-249-Ind_Lady Nerevar_1.rar

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Almalexia 20,-29 Common housing (works at the visitor center)

Exterior in M3A6 http://tamriel-rebuilt.org/old_forum/viewtopic.php?t=21206&start=360

#17 http://i.imgur.com/eCe8R.jpg
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here's the review

Edit: oh yeah and i forgot to mention that it's missing a north arrow
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Correction: NorthMarker

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TESAME:Clean

Woah! I go in and see that the interior does not match the exterior.

Why is it named i3-41? This is claim 249
name it i3-249

Missing NorthMarker.

This is Manor District. Use two floors, and put nobleman rich stuff. (de_r furniture)
You used de_p furn. Thats incorrect. A poor person cannot afford a house in the Manor District.

A poor person CANNOT afford an ebony staff.

Illogical placement of the staff.
(How nice, this is the easiest burglary anyone could commit, as the ebony staff is located right in the doorway unguarded.)

The staff floats ontop of the altar.

Tapesteries are bad. USe cleaner ones.

I don't want to ramble on. This interior needs alot of work lore-wise. Snapping and placement is okay. 4/5. The lore is 0. So thats 4/10. Not TR quality. This will be TR quality if redone.
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I wouldn't be so harsh swiftoak, its not THAT bad.

I agree, the ebony staff shouldn't be there and i don't know why i didn't list that befoer,e but for uch a small interior, it doesnt need to be rich, even though it's in the manor district. There should be a lot more added to it though and on revising my review, i think perhaps its more worthy of a 6 than a 9, not sure wy i gave it that... it needs to be fixed up quite a bit but its not totally crap.

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alright, i fixed/updated this file. i made most of the furniture r (exept for the bed which is, rm) and made it seem like a int in the manor district more. also added backstry:

the woman who lives here inherited this house from her deseased father. She isent used to living by herself, and the house tehrefore is dirty and unkept. The woman is one of those religious xenophobic types.

caution: int has heavy OoT dependancies
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TESAME: Clean

Fits exterior: Yes



Northmarker set: Yes
Loading errors: No



Review: -TR_furn_crate_broke01 floats
-Remove flin, an expensive imperial drink
-tr_potion_wine_05 is imperial as well

Comments Lookin' good in the nieghborhood.

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Fixed by Cougar. Use top file!
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Post by Thrignar Fraxix »

Revoking to make it visible, re-granting to Lady N? Why wasn't this one visible? Re-approving now that its visible again... wierd...
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Revoked for repurpose.
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Unlocking for claimage.
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claiming
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finished
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Post by Swiftoak »

TESAME: Clean

Fits exterior: Yes



Northmarker set: Yes
Loading errors: No



Review:

Comments Made this 2x2. Fixed a bleeding tapestry and moved some stuff around. Otherwise, great, didn't touch anything else.

Huzzah for progress.

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Moving to N/A until we decide what to do with Alma claims.
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