I've re-written a lot of the dialogue, and filled in a lot of blanks including one place where the placer says to Ervul (the enchanter)
Choice "Aren't you an enchanter? How does an alchemist interfere with your business when you're in a completely different trade?" 4
and I though "HAHA I'M SO WITTY", but then arvisrend in chat went through it, didn't find it funny at all, and at the end says "I don't get why they're in competition".
I made some bullshit up to be a running gag that everyone thinks Nisriel is great because she just made this new policy on selling cheap Kwama eggs, but it's not really working so well...any thoughts on this? Perhaps should I make it so Nisriel wants to expand into enchanting too and Ervul is all like 'no'?
ETA: Also, I've got a CTD problem. If I don't talk to the enchanter before reading Nisirel's diary (and getting the journal update), when I exit her shop I don't get the forcedgreeting, though the enchanter appears. When I talk to him I get a CTD.
This only happens if I *don't* talk to him. If I talk to him, it triggers fine. So I'm thinking it must be a problem with my out of date TR_Data file.
arvisrend tried it and said he never had that problem. Could someone run it through and see if it's just my shitty PC being shitty? The file is the one at the top of the claim updates.
Other than that, the first 2 quests are finished...except the second one needs to be reworked. Yeah, BC, you're right - it's really hard working on this since the dialogue isn't in order so well.
TG, where areee youuu?
"Thank you to the Makers of Rules. To the Breakers of Backs. To the sincere Autocrats. To the false Democrats. To the Builders of Walls. To the Painters of Lines. To those who Tattoo Numbers. To those who point fingers. To those who count their greed. To those who split by colour. To those who smile their lies.
Thank you so very much."