Witcher's Showcase

witcher93 · Post by **witcher93** » Tue Dec 12, 2006 7:20 pm

I've done a little tavern that is here, i think...

Lady Nerevar · Post by **Lady Nerevar** » Tue Dec 12, 2006 7:40 pm

it looks ok judging by the screen, mind posting the esp so we can do a formal review?

witcher93 · Post by **witcher93** » Tue Dec 12, 2006 7:49 pm

Oops wrong file, this should do...

witcher93 · Post by **witcher93** » Tue Dec 12, 2006 7:52 pm

Oh ok this should be the .esp file I hope you guys will like it...

EDIT: The interior cell is named "Bar"

Lady Nerevar · Post by **Lady Nerevar** » Wed Dec 13, 2006 8:52 pm

OK< here is the review.

to begin, this interior seems ill suited to be a bar. there is only one table in the whole place. I sugest expanding the upper floor by a few tiles and adding a few more tables.
-the is style mixing in here. while the table is imperial middle class, the bookshelf is dunmer upper. sick to the imperial (and keep a consistant value)
-the logs bleed into the fireplace
-the candle on the bar is dunmer and bleeds slightly into the bar.
-the candle stick on the table bleeds into it
-most of the stacked plates float.
-the small drum on the shelf bleeds into the shelf and into the large drum. hte large drum also bleeds into the shelf a bit.
on to the basement
-the candles are dumer and bleeds into both the floor and the wall.

over all, i think this interior needs a bit more detail, especialy the basement. there should be more table upstairs and more storage downstairs so that this interior will feel usable and realistic. you should fix the errors mentioned above and expand/detail this interior some more and resubmit.

witcher93 · Post by **witcher93** » Thu Dec 14, 2006 5:21 pm

Hi! I'm just an aspiring TR Modder that has made his showcase.

PoHa! · Post by **PoHa!** » Thu Dec 14, 2006 5:46 pm

I've merged your topics. Please keep all your showcase things together. Thanks.

witcher93 · Post by **witcher93** » Fri Dec 15, 2006 3:06 pm

I've done a mesh based on Lutemoth's Concept art.
Hope you guys like it.

witcher93 · Post by **witcher93** » Fri Dec 15, 2006 3:38 pm

Will someone please review my work so that I'll know what's wrong?

Nemon · Post by **Nemon** » Fri Dec 15, 2006 4:09 pm

Okay, there are quite a few things you should look into.

Firstly, you should add a lot, and I mean a lot, of furniture. My Manor seems pretty abandoned, so a few tables, chairs and stuff would do. Of course they also would need clutter, i.e spoons, cups and plates on tables.

Almost all of the bookshelves are empty, and I can hardly believe any alchemist without books. Some of them bleeds into the wall as well.

You've used a nord door for an upper class interior, you should change that.

Most chandeliers hang too low, you don't want to burn your head.

I'd suggest you make a smaller, yet far more detailed interior, I believe you'd find that easier.

angelus6 · Post by **angelus6** » Fri Dec 15, 2006 5:08 pm

agreed, maybe try either one of the Farmhouse Interiors or somthing lowerclass possibly.

witcher93 · Post by **witcher93** » Fri Dec 15, 2006 7:52 pm

Thanks a lot guys. I'll do that, how about the mesh?

witcher93 · Post by **witcher93** » Sat Dec 16, 2006 12:54 pm

Ok I've elminated the problems of the Tavern.

Nanu · Post by **Nanu** » Sat Dec 16, 2006 10:15 pm

Patience. You're not going to get very far in a project of this magnitude if you can't be patient. You've gotten plenty of attention. You don't have to PM me after no one jumps on your *.esp within five hours.

I'll review this when I can. While you're waiting, take some time and go back over your interior and add more detail and check for floaters and bleeders. The less of these we fine, the better off your mod is going to be.

Nemon · Post by **Nemon** » Sun Dec 17, 2006 9:14 pm

Ok, witcher93... this won't be a very long review, but this last interior is better than the manor you uploaded. Still, it could do with some detailing.

Think clutter, and what would be reasonable to find in such a location! Misc stuff such as baskets, brooms, buckets, plates, small pots and so on and so forth makes the whole difference! Tapestries makes walls look better, maybe a bench here and there(although the concept of sitting space in Morrowind is retarded)... Don't be afraid to have +200 refs in your interior cell, it makes the place look more populated. Good luck with your showcase, new modders are always welcome, as long as they obey Sload

witcher93 · Post by **witcher93** » Thu Dec 28, 2006 11:16 am

Ok I've been away from a while but now I'm back so I've got my tavern clutterd up and I'm uploading it now.
Does anyone know how to install the blender nif scripts?

witcher93 · Post by **witcher93** » Thu Jul 17, 2008 2:25 pm

Hello, i would like to apply for interiors and later for modelling. Not very good at modelling yet so i will wait to post some of my work, i use Maya as modelling program and also Rhinoceros 3.0. As for interiors i usually work on Morrowind interiors but i am getting on Oblivion interiors too.

Harke the Apostle · Post by **Harke the Apostle** » Thu Jul 17, 2008 2:45 pm

Welcome to TR, witcher93,

If you make a Morrowind interior I'll be happy to review it for you.

witcher93 · Post by **witcher93** » Thu Jul 17, 2008 2:52 pm

Ok! I am currently working on a small tavern, no big thing.

blackbird · Post by **blackbird** » Thu Jul 17, 2008 3:06 pm

Ok.
Have you read some tutorials about interior making?
Don't forget to upload your files to this site.

witcher93 · Post by **witcher93** » Thu Jul 17, 2008 3:21 pm

Well, i am not new to this site and have posted a showcase some long time ago, like 2 years ago or something like that. After that i had no more time to spend as because of school so now i'm back to work.

witcher93 · Post by **witcher93** » Thu Jul 17, 2008 4:09 pm

Ok, i finished it. It's a very simple tavern that is supposed to be a lowlife tavern.

Thrignar Fraxix · Post by **Thrignar Fraxix** » Fri Jul 18, 2008 2:09 pm

merged in your old showcase, sorry about that never getting a review

witcher93 · Post by **witcher93** » Fri Jul 18, 2008 11:07 pm

Thanks for merging it i tried to find it on the older pages so i would post into that but i couldn't find it, anyway no problem for the review...

Post by **Haplo** » Fri Jul 18, 2008 11:12 pm

About your tavern showcase; it barely has any detail! I see a table or two, a plate or two, and some mostly-filled identical bedrooms, but nothing else aside from the architecture. There should be several tables, each with a couple chairs each. Try adding tapestries to the wall (make sure you add the right type, common tapestries don't belong in Dunmer interiors, and vice versa). Add crates and sacks to a corner or a storage room. They have to have supplies of food and drink! Add more clutter to the tables, more silverware, etc. Also more wares for the bartenders to sell. Plenty of miscellaneous stuff.

You have some custom doors(I think), but they don't fit. There are vanilla doors made for those doorjambs. Find them and use the right type. I think they have a very similar name as the doorjambs, so it shouldn't be too hard.

I also got a message about several (9, maybe?) duplicate references being removed. Make sure your plug-in is cleaned with TESAME (or Wrye Mash, I guess)!

We'll await your updated tavern.

witcher93 · Post by **witcher93** » Sun Jul 20, 2008 1:01 pm

Thanks for the review!

I will post some meshes too because i got into modelling lately and they're ok from my point of view

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