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Ok, I fixed the errors addressed in your post, so here is an updated version!
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- theviking
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hi, i had a look at your esp and i found the following things:
The plugin is dirty; use a program called TESAME to clean it. You can find it at main/utilities on this site. Remove everything but TES3, your cell and any thing you made yourself.
The shrine:
the large chest floats and you should problably lock it,
the bowl floats,
the cup floats,
the candlestick floats,
the shrine bleeds into the carpet,
the carpet itself floats,
the back two benches float because they rest partially on a carpet-> move the carpet under then or move the benches away from the carpet,
the atronach tapestry floats,
the dibella tapestry as well, but a little less,
The sleeping room:
you can bleed the pillows more, they are soft so they bleed,
the leftmost chest bleeds into the pillar,
the back left chest is bleeding a tiny bit,
the back left bed is floating,
the center bed also floats, because it partially rests on the carpet, move that a little away from the bed,
turn the shield a little so that it also rests on the rim,
the right chest is bleeding within the pillar,
In the rest of the interior you make the same errors, so I advice you to perfect these two rooms. You'll learn a lot in the process and after that we'll perfect the whole interior. You show a lot of talent! I can see you become a TR_modder, you just need to reduce your floaters and bleeders first. The pathgrid and the lightning looks fine, so you know that already!
The plugin is dirty; use a program called TESAME to clean it. You can find it at main/utilities on this site. Remove everything but TES3, your cell and any thing you made yourself.
The shrine:
the large chest floats and you should problably lock it,
the bowl floats,
the cup floats,
the candlestick floats,
the shrine bleeds into the carpet,
the carpet itself floats,
the back two benches float because they rest partially on a carpet-> move the carpet under then or move the benches away from the carpet,
the atronach tapestry floats,
the dibella tapestry as well, but a little less,
The sleeping room:
you can bleed the pillows more, they are soft so they bleed,
the leftmost chest bleeds into the pillar,
the back left chest is bleeding a tiny bit,
the back left bed is floating,
the center bed also floats, because it partially rests on the carpet, move that a little away from the bed,
turn the shield a little so that it also rests on the rim,
the right chest is bleeding within the pillar,
In the rest of the interior you make the same errors, so I advice you to perfect these two rooms. You'll learn a lot in the process and after that we'll perfect the whole interior. You show a lot of talent! I can see you become a TR_modder, you just need to reduce your floaters and bleeders first. The pathgrid and the lightning looks fine, so you know that already!
Well, I fixed the errors you mentioned as far as I can see...
please let me know if I didn't!
please let me know if I didn't!
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- theviking
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Only the back left bed is still floating, and the center chest is bleeding by a tiny bit. You changed all that i said , and you did it quick. Well done!
Central hall:
the first table from the shrine is bleeding,
the chair next to it is floating,
turn the arrows so that they rest on two "wings" (this one is difficult),
the central table is bleeding in the carpet and the chair next to it is floating,
the silver claymore is floating,
the central carpet is floating,
the last table is bleeding and the chair next to it is floating,
the pauldron is floating,
the quill is floating a little bit,
the tapestry behind the crates is floating,
Only these things to fix and then i surely recommend you! (If i can)
Central hall:
the first table from the shrine is bleeding,
the chair next to it is floating,
turn the arrows so that they rest on two "wings" (this one is difficult),
the central table is bleeding in the carpet and the chair next to it is floating,
the silver claymore is floating,
the central carpet is floating,
the last table is bleeding and the chair next to it is floating,
the pauldron is floating,
the quill is floating a little bit,
the tapestry behind the crates is floating,
Only these things to fix and then i surely recommend you! (If i can)
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I think that would be a good idea. The mistakes were simply those of someone inexperienced, and beyond the technical issues the castle showed alot of promise.theviking wrote: Only these things to fix and then i surely recommend you!
'What if man is not really a scoundrel - man in general, I mean, the whole race of mankind - then all the rest is prejudice, simply artificial terrors and there are no barriers and it's all as it should be.'
Well... the one thing I could not figure out how to do was the arrows... how do you do it? They just don't seem to want to rotate! Any way, here is what I got done...
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- Clean TR_MaleousCastle.esp
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If you die without fear, you die with honor. If you die without courage, you die with disgrace. If you die without fighting, you die without service to the emperor.
- theviking
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With the arrows, you first turn them with x so that two wings are on the underside. (the arrow can be quite a way above or below the table) Then turn them using z. Repeat until they are just how you want them.
The left carpet still floats but you changed all the things I mentioned in my review. You are the first member that I recommend.
The left carpet still floats but you changed all the things I mentioned in my review. You are the first member that I recommend.
YAY! Thank you very much for recommending me, I really appreciate it! Hopefully someone with the power sees the same in me, as I can't wait to join TR!
If you die without fear, you die with honor. If you die without courage, you die with disgrace. If you die without fighting, you die without service to the emperor.
I'm not even going to look at this.
You have motivation - we need that. You're getting skill - we need that. You no doubt have creativity - we need that too.
But you're going to have to be a bit better at the error fixing. Look over your interior before you submit it for any floaters or bleeders. Don't worry if Thrig catches something.
Do me a cave, or a tomb. Something dungeony, but small. No need to kill yourself on a second interior. Actually, make a small Velothi tomb and I'll let you use it for a filler int so it will get used.
Make sore that you check your int for errors first, you've came a long way in a short time. I appriciate that.
Do this, and I'll give you your rights.
You have motivation - we need that. You're getting skill - we need that. You no doubt have creativity - we need that too.
But you're going to have to be a bit better at the error fixing. Look over your interior before you submit it for any floaters or bleeders. Don't worry if Thrig catches something.
Do me a cave, or a tomb. Something dungeony, but small. No need to kill yourself on a second interior. Actually, make a small Velothi tomb and I'll let you use it for a filler int so it will get used.
Make sore that you check your int for errors first, you've came a long way in a short time. I appriciate that.
Do this, and I'll give you your rights.
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I am happy to do more work, not sad in the least. And if this goes into the mod as filler, then it is even better. I will get started right away!
If you die without fear, you die with honor. If you die without courage, you die with disgrace. If you die without fighting, you die without service to the emperor.
I'm glad you understand.
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Excellent! I'm glad that we aren't going to lose you!souldread wrote:I am happy to do more work, not sad in the least. And if this goes into the mod as filler, then it is even better. I will get started right away!
'What if man is not really a scoundrel - man in general, I mean, the whole race of mankind - then all the rest is prejudice, simply artificial terrors and there are no barriers and it's all as it should be.'
Lose me? HEH! My devotion to TR couldn't be beaten by an extra load of work, if anything it is strengthened! (by the way, I already have the basic design of the tomb done, and am working on furnishing it)
Thanks for this chance to prove my self!
Thanks for this chance to prove my self!
If you die without fear, you die with honor. If you die without courage, you die with disgrace. If you die without fighting, you die without service to the emperor.
Yay! I finished the tomb, and checked it twice for floaters or bleeders. I also cleaned the mod through TESAME. So, here it is!
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- Clean TR_FyrAncestralTomb.esp
- Fyr Ancestral Tomb. Hope it is good enough!
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You can safely remove the nerano ancestral tomb in TESAME. Im guessing you used it as example, if you clean it with TESAME, nothing in the cell will change.
The big ashpit bleeds into the ground,(might be intentional)
the heap of bones in the big room rests unlogical,
the skull and the steel mace also rest unlogical,
some of the bones in the ashpit you can bleed more,
the back right brazier bleeds,
the steel saber rests unlogical,
3 of the 4 bones in the right room rest unlogical,
the rubies are bleeding,
the steel katana rests unlogical,
the imperial broadsword should be replaced, because this is a dunmer tomb, make it perhaps a chitin shortsword,
You're using quite a lot of medium expensive items, i'd say replace one or two items with poor items and reduce the pearls and rubies.
If this was released for the mod, i'd problably fix it and then it would be approved, because its a nice tomb. I know you can fix these errors and i really want to help you get promoted. For most of the bones, turn them with z or let them bleed a little. For the swords, turn them so that their blade is also touching the surface. Succes!
The big ashpit bleeds into the ground,(might be intentional)
the heap of bones in the big room rests unlogical,
the skull and the steel mace also rest unlogical,
some of the bones in the ashpit you can bleed more,
the back right brazier bleeds,
the steel saber rests unlogical,
3 of the 4 bones in the right room rest unlogical,
the rubies are bleeding,
the steel katana rests unlogical,
the imperial broadsword should be replaced, because this is a dunmer tomb, make it perhaps a chitin shortsword,
You're using quite a lot of medium expensive items, i'd say replace one or two items with poor items and reduce the pearls and rubies.
If this was released for the mod, i'd problably fix it and then it would be approved, because its a nice tomb. I know you can fix these errors and i really want to help you get promoted. For most of the bones, turn them with z or let them bleed a little. For the swords, turn them so that their blade is also touching the surface. Succes!
Thanks! I guess I don't have the eyes to be a reviewer
Edit: Ok, here it is... yet again lol... this time it is REALLY cleaned
Edit: Ok, here it is... yet again lol... this time it is REALLY cleaned
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Sorry, I had a really busy week;
the back right brazier still bleeds,
the saber bleeds,
the coda flower bleeds,
But you changed very much of what i said. You seem to understand the way the bones and the swords should rest. This tomb can be used as a filler interior, after fixing these three slight problems. I again recommend you for TR_moddership. When you are promoted, there are three caves from map2 in the unclaimed section. If you like to do caves we like it as well if you do one of those three. But please wait untill you're promoted and can claim one. That shouldn't take too long...
the back right brazier still bleeds,
the saber bleeds,
the coda flower bleeds,
But you changed very much of what i said. You seem to understand the way the bones and the swords should rest. This tomb can be used as a filler interior, after fixing these three slight problems. I again recommend you for TR_moddership. When you are promoted, there are three caves from map2 in the unclaimed section. If you like to do caves we like it as well if you do one of those three. But please wait untill you're promoted and can claim one. That shouldn't take too long...
If we could stop handing out bolded recommendations, that'd be great.
But yes, I'll add you to the usergroup, but you have to PM Haplo to get your your tag and junk.
But yes, I'll add you to the usergroup, but you have to PM Haplo to get your your tag and junk.
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I'm sorry, is something wrong with the bolded recommendations? I picked up the habit from theviking because it looked like a pretty good idea to draw attention to the approval.If we could stop handing out bolded recommendations, that'd be great.
Imagine my insult to find that "Raw Glass has no effect on you." I became very huffy at the implication that my intelligence could not be lowered further. Then again, I did just eat a piece of glass.
Ok, here this is, and it is ready for filler material! I had a little trouble with the saber, seeing as it has a rounded handle, but I think it looks okay now... so please do not find anything wrong with it! Lol...
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- The *Final* version of the tomb, hopefully I can move on to bigger and better things now...
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Lol, you could have moved on since you became a modder. But anyway, thanks for the tomb. Ill try to remember it and when someone needs it it will be included. I think this will be used for map 3 as a filler but maybe someone needs it before that.
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Okay, here is what I am currently working on besides my int for TR... its a city called silingrad, Where you should COC is to Silingrad, Waterfront district. It is extremely a WIP, with only the Waterfront district more or less done.
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