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The_Imperial
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The_Imperial's Showcase

Post by The_Imperial »

Here is my showcase.

My real name is Joe. I'm 14 years old and from the United States. I have good interior designing experiance and have created many private mods for myself. Here is a taste of one I made called 'My Own House".

I also have experiance in NPC's, dialogue, and creating items. (No modeling, or texturing unfortunately. Partly because I lack the supplies. AKA Photoshop, or 3dsMax.)

BTW- I know I haven't cleaned it out but I'm on a serious time constraint at the time of this writing. I'm moving from California to Idaho to live with my Dad for a year. This is the day for packing up my entire room and I have only 2 hours. I'm really sorry. Also, I won't be able to reply for a few days because I'm driving a 1,000 miles starting tommorow.

The End. :p

Last-minute Edit- This is for Morrowind.
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theviking
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Post by theviking »

I had a look at your plugin, and saw the following things;
Your plugin is dirty and so it affects other things from the original game. You can use a program called TESAME to clean that, it is located here: http://www.tamriel-rebuilt.org/?p=modding_data/utils
Open it, select all items except TES3, thing you added to your mod (like a new chest or so) and the cells that you modified.

i review only your first room, the rest ill do tomorrow;
the table stands in the wall and floats partially,
one chair floats in the air,
the sujamma and the mazte are bleeding within each other,
the bowl rests on a point, these kind of objects should bleed more. You can see on the side how much you should lower it,
the scuttle bleeds through the plate,
Can you rotate the rat meat so that it touches the bottom of the plate as well?
the right chair bleeds into the table,
the bookcase is bleeding into the wall and the floor,
the alchemist formalury is bleeding into the bookcase,
the guide to vvardenfell and the platter are bleeding into the back of the bookcase,
frontier, conquest isnt touching the other book,
the candle is bleeding slightly,
the restore fatigue potion is bleeding as well,
vivec and mephala is bleeding into the other book.

The rug in the hallway is floating and a lamp as well, (you can resize the rug)
sorry, but the closet, drawers and the two chests all bleed into the wall, to move them you can also move the tapestry out between them,
the chair, the shelf and the wall screen all are dunmer objects while the rest of the interior is imperial, to match with them you need to replace them (theres an inmperial wallscreen in TR_data)
the chair floats,
the shirt and the pants on the shelf float partially (with clothes you need to "f" them twice)
please rotate the amulet so that it matches the shirt,
the closet floats and bleeds and looks a little too small,
the bed floats sligthly,


This might seem a long list but don't let me discourage you. I think you know how to properly place an item because you did that quite good on the table and the bookcase. Just be careful when placing objects near a wall. The velothi tileset has a curved edge near the wall that can make furniture float or bleed easily. To see what I mean, see Octavo's showcase, he has around the same issues as you and blackbird made a picture of it. For a first showcase interior it is actually pretty good! I wish you lots of succes fixing these errors!
Interiors: 25
Reviews: more then 250!
Quest Reviews: 3
NPC claims: 2

Currently looking for quest designers.
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Post by The_Imperial »

Okay thanks alot. I'll have a new, clean .esp within in a couple of days when I finish unpacking.
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Sorry but I'm a little busy and unable to update. I've decided to start anew and create a different showcase. I will post when It's finished.
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