[Morrowind] Map1 Beta 2.0 NPC/Dialogue Error reporting

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NPC: Colada Helas
Error: After completing the "Stalker" Fighters guild quest in Firewatch, when you try to speak to her she yells at you for bringing the target of the mission inside (Even though he isn't with you) and forces a goodbye.

Mission was already turned in for reward, and was completed by sending him away on the ship.
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NPC: Simeth

After completing the Mithras quest (Leaving catacombs, going to worldmap (Where Simeth can be found on the top of the tower again), returning to Mithras after the final mission, and letting quite a bit of time pass) Simeth can still be found in the final room of the catacombs even though he says he is just going to clean up before leaving.
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NPC: Most NPC's you can join the thieves guild through, Habasi Sugar-lips, etc. several locations

Topic: Join the Thieves guild

Error: After choosing "join the thieves guild" the NPC responds with something like "Well, you look like you have some skill. You sure you want to join?" If you respond "yeah, lemme in," the dialog loops back to "Well, you look like you have some skill. You sure you want to join?" The only way to get out of the conversation is to decline membership, which results in the NPC liking you less.
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Post by gronbuske »

NPC:Everyone in "Howling Noose" in Firewatch

Topic:Service

Error:Instead of saying the players name they say PCname
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Awkward Travel Dialog

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Bolnosdin Grit, Therionaut (Gah Ouadaruhn)
Topic - Port Telvannis
"...and it is easy to find one in destination of..."
should probably read "...and it is easy to find one to..."
or, if you need to include the DESTINATION topic link in the dialog, "and it is easy to find one bound for the destinations of..."
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Anonymous wrote:----------------------
NPC: Most NPC's you can join the thieves guild through, Habasi Sugar-lips, etc. several locations

Topic: Join the Thieves guild

Error: After choosing "join the thieves guild" the NPC responds with something like "Well, you look like you have some skill. You sure you want to join?" If you respond "yeah, lemme in," the dialog loops back to "Well, you look like you have some skill. You sure you want to join?" The only way to get out of the conversation is to decline membership, which results in the NPC liking you less.
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NPC: Shugar-Lips (balmora theives guild)
Topic: "Join the Thives guild", loops when TR is enabled.
type: faction join
Error: gets broken when Tr is enabled.

suggestion:
possibly a faction join script causes errors in base faction join script?
(i'm far from an expert)

thought you should know (i've confirmed it IS TR that causes issues and have duplicated error on multiple machines).

i'll be interested in a solution
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Post by Bloodthirsty Crustacean »

Yeah, we know that one's solution. It's the only major bug introduced, so it was first on my list of working out how to fix.

Unfortunately due to the nature of the bug, it can only be fixed by directly editing the TR_Map1.esm, and so we can't work out some nice simple patch .esp.

It will (I should damn well hope) be fixed in the next version. I've given instructions to relevant people, IIRC.
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NPC: TR_m1_Brevales Girano

Error: Fight Value inexplicably set to 100. Please make her a passive 'fellow traveller' again. (She's an unarmed woman in a robe, with only a copy of Lives of the Saints to her name, for Vehk's sake. :P)
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Bloodthirsty Crustacean wrote:NPC: TR_m1_Brevales Girano

Error: Fight Value inexplicably set to 100. Please make her a passive 'fellow traveller' again. (She's an unarmed woman in a robe, with only a copy of Lives of the Saints to her name, for Vehk's sake. :P)
I noticed that one while playtesting the MQ too. I'm just after beating off those hardened thugs who ambushed me and my charge and am looking around for more trouble when I find myself under fierce assault by a......
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Enchanter?

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Cerul Arnem, Port Telvannis Enchanter, is a Spellmaker and sells spells (at least after the "Cacophony" thing). He doesn't do Enchanting though, which I found a bit odd for an Enchanter.

- Also, the Port Telvannis clothier named [Calbin] Ragis, has a trader banner outside his housepod, rather than a clothier banner. - I don't have my notes with me, so I don't recall his full name. - Edited to finish partial name.

- Another related item: exiting Calbin Ragis's pod leaves you partially "stuck" in the stairs. It usually takes me half a dozen jumps or moves in various directions to "unstick" myself, and I had to resort to the console "fix me" command on at least one occasion.
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Post by the_cosmonaut »

NPC: everyone in Port Telvannis

Topic: Sadas Plantation

Error: they say it's on the esatern tip of the island, should say western
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TR_telv_guard_s00000008 Telvanni Isles Region (40,18) 332753 154096 250
-"Guard with no helm. Is on the outskirts of town alone, makes no sense not to be fully armored."

-"Many guards in Port Telvannis appear to be wearing some form of molecrab armor but have cephalopod helms. Since there is a molecrab helm, it would fit more."

-"There are some other guards who do not have helms at all. These however are in the city near the so called 'gates.' Think it would be best for all of the guards to be wearing a helm."
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Cell: Ranyon-ruhn, The Dancing Jug
NPC: TR_telv_guard00000000 on basement floor
Error: "He often faces the wall"
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Cell: Tel Ouada (25,18 )
NPC: TR_m1_Llaala Nothren00000000
Error: "floats"
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Cell: Port Telvannis, Felisel Gavos: Bookseller
NPC: TR_telv_guard00000011
Error: "AI problem: runs like a stupid"
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Cell: Alendu Plantation, Mansion
NPC: TR_m1_S_Elegil00000000
Error: "she has no shoes"
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Cell: Firewatch, Hill Bastion
NPC: TR_m1_Tania_Phiencel00000000
Error: "has no 'Background' and 'My Trade' topic
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Cell:Veramus Iron Mine
NPC: TR_m1_Fadril_Faren00000000
Error: "Has 'Kwama Worker' topic but is a miner"
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Cell: Veramus Iron Mine
NPC: Imperial Guard00000004 near Fabius Varian
Error: AI error - he often falls in the flooded area
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Cell: Veramus Iron Mine
NPC: Imperial Guard00000004 (the same NPC as above)
Error: sometimes has a forced 'Goodbye' in greeting
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Harke the Apostle, Sun Jul 13, 2008 7:26 pm
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Hemitheon, Thu Jan 29, 2009 8:51 pm
*sarcastic*
You know what's also popular? Enormous flying cities and ridable dragons. Maybe TR should invest in navigable ships and underwater cities.
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Post by Kayo »

( not sure if this is the right place )
Cell:Dassudan
NPC:IDk Trapped Orc?
Error:If you tell him to follow you (during the quest) and walk away of of the platform he will keep saying that the two of you had escaped. But the two of us hadn't. If I stand on the platform then he asks what how he cud help agen.
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You have to bring along someone to free him, otherwise you will be trapped yourself. Galan Brandt probably knows what you have to do. If you did this already it should be counted as an error.
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Post by PCgamerdude »

actually there is a paralyzing scroll in the basket of scrolls in the room above the platform. I unlocked the containment gates with the key and led an ash mummy up to the platform and paralyzed it, but wait untill after the paralization wares off the ash zombie before you talk to the orc about leaving or he will run back into the room before the zombie gets off the platform and be trapped again
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I didn't talk to Galan at all i just met the orc. and to solve the quest I did what PCgamerdude did.
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Post by Kovacius »

One of the guards in Veramus Iron Mine appears to have a path set to take him down the flooded passage and underwater. In 3 out of 3 tries, he walked into the water and eventually drowned. His starting location is near the East Empire company representative - Fabius Varian.

Also, Green-Eyes, the Alchemist in Firewatch, has the topic "potions". If this topic is selected before "raiders", which is below it in the menu, the dialog doesn't make a lot of sense: "They were all for...", when you have no idea what "they" is about.

Teris Sevuro, on the topic "mainland" - "Noteworthy is also..." probably should read "Also noteworthy is...."

It seems odd that the pilgrim Brevales Girano attacks on sight with her bare fists.

The topic "Telvanni Mouths" in Port Telvannis yields the response "...since they take most decisions....". This is apparently a typo, and should read "...since they MAKE most decisions...".
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Cell: Firewatch (17,15)
NPC: TR_imp_archer00000000
Error: "this Imperial Archer falls to the ground very often" (please check the other archers too)
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Cell: Firewatch, Census and Excise Offices
NPC: TR_m1_Jeande_Beluel00000000
Error: "has several topics about Vvardenfell: is that normal?"
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Cell: Tel Ouada (24,18)
NPC: TR_m1_Dunveri_Rodran00000000
Error: "faces the boat instead of the PC"
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Cell: Sarvanni (28,16)
NPC: TR_telv_guard00000002
Error: "AI problem: falls to the ground"
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Cell: Loen Doldal's Shack
NPC: TR_m1_Loen_Doldal00000000
Error: "has topic "ger cured", but the PC isn't diseased"
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Cell: Molagreahd Region (21,15)
NPC: TR_m1_O_Roamer_Rogue00000002
Error: "the other roamer appears as his double (no, it's not a doubling issue)"
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My book sucks cause it´s a vampire.

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*sarcastic*
You know what's also popular? Enormous flying cities and ridable dragons. Maybe TR should invest in navigable ships and underwater cities.
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Post by the_cosmonaut »

I think Map 1 makes the vanilla quest "Trade Mission to the Zainab" unavailable. For some reason, the dialogue bit that starts the quest (said by Turedus Talanian as a response to the "work" topic) disappears with the plugin loaded (I checked in the CS, and it's just not there)
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Listiele Rirne, in the Firewatch Palace - topic: someone in particular - "...invaluable.Ladia Tunifus the head of..." - no space between the "." and "Ladia" ; also missing the word "is".

Duchess - topic: House Indoril - "They refuse to move form their darkness..." should be "from".

Also noticed that Dolami Saren is well armored and attacks on sight, but lacks a weapon.

Same for TR1_m1_Brevales_Girano00000000, Boethian Mountains region (25, 13) - Attacks with fists.
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Several people - e.g. Shavra gra-Vatok (Lighthouse), Nataya Radasar (in front of Tel Aranyon), Alira Yassimaer (Tel Aranyon Upper):
Have the topic "Sevroth Teles", i.e. the priest in Pt Telvannis.

Pt Telvannis enchanter quest:
It's spelled "cacophony".

First Mouth quest for Fervas Shulisa:
Tells you to get a soul gem shipment; from where to collect them, appears only in the journal, but not in dialogue.

Rentable beds somewhere in Pt Telvannis would be kind of nice. :)
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Rentable beds

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There's a free bunk in The Avenue, if you need one.
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Where? I just checked in the editor, and every bed has an owner.
And second - it's not that I *need* one (sleep mod, or something like this), I *want* to rent a bed. This is a major administrative centre and trading hub, and there's no place for people to stay? I'm a Telvanni noble and have to look around for a bed that happens to be used by no one? Locals even tell you that guests stay at the Avenue...
Yeah, it is nitpicky and a minor issue, that's why I mentioned it in a short "by the way, while you're fixing things, that would be nice" at the end of my post... ;)
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Post by Kovacius »

TR_m1_Vedran_Gavonir in Bahrammu (15, 25) can't hit the broad side of a Netch with that chitin longsword. He attacked me as part of a mini-quest, and didn't hit me once in well over 5 minutes of fighting (well, not exactly fighting, I just stood there while he waved the sword around threateningly, until I got bored).
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Cell: Tel Ouada, Guar Farm: Erdlan Galelan's Shack
NPC: TR_m1_q_Erdlan_FG00000000
Error: "in the dialogue option Erdlan Galehan, he talks about himself in the third person"
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Cell: Gah Ouadaruhn
Topic: local area
Error: "The road east from Gah Ouadaruhn takes you past the Molkadh Mounts and on to Ranyon-ruhn." should be "the road west".
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Cell: Gah Ouadaruhn, Bal Gernak's chambers
Topic: latest rumors
Error: NPCs in the same cell and Bal Gernak himself talk about him as hearsay:
slave Pi'rah: "... heard something about some Telvanni wizard around here..."
Bal Gernak: "I hear Bal Gernak is angry..."
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Cell: Tel Ouada (24,18) 203029 149995 223
NPC: TR_m1_Dun_Akhul00000000
Error: "Has only 1 topic + the default 'Solstheim'
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Cell: Tel Ouada (24,18) 204298 150599 231
NPC: TR_m1_Fillerd00000000
Error: "Has topic 'get cured' but PC is not disesed"
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Cell: Tel Ouada (25,18) 204838 151386 48
NPC: TR_m1_Thadas_Vidron00000000
Error: "Has topic 'get cured but PC is not disesed"
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Cell: Boethian Mountains Region (25,12) 208195 106219 658
Location: on the road, not far from the Shasmassadan cave
Error: TR_m1_Brevales_Girano00000000 "has a TR_m1_NPC_Outlaw script and attaks me with fists"
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Cell: Ranyon-ruhn (27,12) 227647 102363 336
Location: one of the two outside merchants
Error: TR_m1_Hekka_Gildaren00000000 "has no shoes"
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Harke the Apostle, Sun Jul 13, 2008 7:26 pm
My book sucks cause it´s a vampire.

Hemitheon, Thu Jan 29, 2009 8:51 pm
*sarcastic*
You know what's also popular? Enormous flying cities and ridable dragons. Maybe TR should invest in navigable ships and underwater cities.
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Post by JuliusMagnus »

Octavo wrote:Bolsnodia Grit (don't remember where)
Ranyon Rhun commoners
Topic: census
The dialogue calls him a handy man in the temple but the Journal entry calls him a miner.
It's a bit different in my case (however I didn't ask around in the temple):

9/11/2008 (19:03)TR_Map1.esm 3/26/2008 (00:33)
TR_m1_Arthal_Eindari00000000
Ranyon-ruhn, Arthal Eindari's House 3878 3689 14850
"Arthal says Brelar Gildaren is a miner. De journal entry says he is a handyman for the Temple."
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Yep, same with me - maybe Octavo just mixed up who said what.

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TR_m1_Lliretha_Arantam00000000
Bahrammu, Arantam Cave Dwelling 3610 4509 12499
"has barter menu and 20 gm for no obvious reason"

TR_m1_Thelera_Tllas00000000
Gah Sadrith, Wetstone Tavern 4156 4603 15173
"owner of Wetstone tavern, finest mazte in all of Morrowind - but does not sell any mazte"

TR_telv_guard_s00000020
Gah Sadrith, Market 294 -1031 1410
"has topics Senillos Tulnus (some guy in Firewatch) and Sethan Andoril (Boethian shrine guy in G.Ou.)"
There are some more guards that have one or both of these topics - in Pt Telvannis, too, iirc.
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Post by Kovacius »

The Imperial Guards in the Library all have the topic "Telvanni Customs", which sounds really strange coming from them.

The one journal entry received in the House Telvanni:To Catch a Spy quest reads "Massages were relayed...", which probably was intended to read "Messages..."

In the Gah Sadrith market, Caius Milacio states "Aleni Moryon might have bigger selection of goods...", seems it shoud read "have A bigger selection..."

I'm running out of fresh errors to find, you're going to have to release another map soon for me to nit-pick.
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HolaMayan wrote:As this is my first post here, I just want to say that Tamriel Rebuilt is an amazing and fantastic project. Great job!!!

Now to the topic at hand:

NPC: Erdlan Galelan
Location: Tel Ouada, Guar Farm
Error: Erdlan Galelan exists twice. He stands next to his shack under the shelter. Also, he stands inside of his shack... unless there is some kind of Doppelgeanger Quest involved, I guess this might be an error :-)
Just a update as to this point, yes, he is still in the public release and neither suggest a clone/twin scenario, plus they have the same reference. I found this while browsing, but otherwise, this is an incredible mod.
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Varana wrote: ...TR_m1_Thelera_Tllas00000000
Gah Sadrith, Wetstone Tavern 4156 4603 15173
"owner of Wetstone tavern, finest mazte in all of Morrowind - but does not sell any mazte"...

This might simply be a comment on mazte (such as "The best Mazte I know is none at all). A lot of non-telvanni characters complain about Vvardenfell's favorite choices of alchohol.
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Post by Kovacius »

One minor conversation oops:

Jeande Beluel, Savant - Topic: molecrab - "They are bred for their it, as well as..." Bred for their hard carapaces?
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Guest: While that might be a nice idea, I don't think it's intended - there are several patrons in the tavern who complain about drinking mazte there and it tasting horribly. That could, of course, be interpreted as a witty comment, too, but I don't really think that's the case. :)

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TR_m1_Mjording00000000
Gah Sadrith, Market 197 223 770
"topic 'Melie' triggers response to free her, even after quest is finished and Melie stands right beside him"

TR_m1_Salious_Mangrondi00000000
The Northern Wind 4527 5225 12482
"has topic 'my trade' and, being a shipmaster, says he can 'take you to another destination for a small fee': doesn't fit ( he is head of the archeological expedition)"

TR_m1_Minkis00000000
The Northern Wind 4450 4280 11945
"drops his pants when speaking to him (intended? ;))"

TR_m1_Mirisun_Varen00000000
Ranyon-ruhn, Mine Office 4478 4164 15554
"'hire a pack guar' quest: journal says he told me Mithras wanted to see me, dialogue says nothing about this"
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I'm not sure whether to post that here or somewhere LGNPC related, but it probably won't hurt if someone here's looking at it, too:

LGNPC Ald'ruhn 1.13 effectively blocks the "Tribunal Temple" dialogue topic (I'm not sure whether it's re-enabled after some quests there, it definitely has dialogue on that topic). The TR Temple quests to gain support therefore don't work.
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Post by Kovacius »

A scout had the topic "Eyestar", which includes a small typo or spelling error: "While the creatures are generally contend to sit on a rock..." should read "...content to sit...".

I'm running out of fresh bugs to find; either someone needs to add more bugs to this map or release a new region, otherwise this one is going to get close to perfect or something ridiculous like that.
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Kovacius wrote:I'm running out of fresh bugs to find; either someone needs to add more bugs to this map or release a new region, otherwise this one is going to get close to perfect or something ridiculous like that.
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NPC: several
Location: the Telvanni
Error: "Give me a straight fight anyday. I don't like dealing with their trickery." - 'anyday' should be 'any day'

NPC: several
Location: Greeting 7
Error: "Greetings, %PCClass. Welcome to the citadel of Firewatch. We have ample services available here, but perhaps you'd like to hear about someone in particular?" - did not hyperlink to 'someone in particular'
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NPC: several
Location: Port Telvannis
Error: One 'latest rumors' entry is

"I hear the guards had fun with those runaway slaves they caught last week. They didn't even get past the bay, from what I hear. Of course, we had to punish the rest of the slaves, in order to make sure that the rest didn't get ideas above their station."

The repetition of 'the rest' in the third sentence sounds really awkward. The second could be replaced by 'they'.
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