I know, I know, another double post. It's the last one, I swear. (EDIT: It was a double until MowSkwoz pulled a combo breaker.)
You hit the nail on the head. There are a couple of things that could be brushed up, but it would be a waste to make you do so in a showcase file when you so obviously know what you're doing. I strongly suggest that you stay simple on your first couple of claims until you get more confident with scripting. The best way to learn is to do. As always, feel free to pester me, MowSkwoz, or BC with any questing-specific issues and concerns you may have, and feel free to bother theviking until he posts more claims.
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Congratulations, Stryker.
EDIT2 Re: What MowSkwoz said
He's absolutely right. However, given how well this quest works, I stand by my statement that it would waste time to re-implement this quest from the beginning. If you're going to spend the time to do a dozen rebuilds, better to be working on a file that will be used.