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Claim type: Interior
Claim ID: TR_i4-164-Hla (#1890)
Faction: Hlaalu
Parent claim: TR_4-8-Hla (#145)
Claimed by: Aeven
Status: Approved (Progress: 100%)
Local map: Kragenmar (Foreign)
Location: 1:(-1838, -3897):0
Files: TR_i4-164-Hla_Aeven_3.esp; TR_i4-164-Hla_Thrignar Fraxix_1.esp

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Kragenmar #28 - "Manor" of an impoverished noble

NPC Note: Noble tries to pretend to be rich

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Post by Munty »

Like the sound of this NPC and would love to do this claim justice, might be nice to see some story behind the noble too. What went wrong?! Would probably see one or two low-level locked doors leading to crummy rooms with common furn, crates and clutter leading from a main 'wealthy' area where the noble has gathered all of his remaining RM furn to maintain an air of wealth. Tell tale signs would be dotted around even the main area. All cupboard contents etc would be sparse and poor, shelves would be nearly bare due to lack of goods worthy of displaying while maintaining the illusion. NPC himself strikes me as wearing an extravagant+ shirt, common trousers and probably no shoes (a topic he will refuse to discuss!) Invoices or demands of payment hidden away in various nooks and crannies to display just how bad things have got for this once-rich noble and a few picture hooks or tapestry hangers minus the artwork.
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Post by Thrignar Fraxix »

revoked, pick one claim
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Post by Munty »

Ok reclaim! I'll take this one if I can have it.
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missed the button, reclaim as above /\
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Post by Thrignar Fraxix »

don't over do it on unique items, I trust you know the naming convention.

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Post by Munty »

Right I'm happy with this claim so I just need someone to look at it now and tell me how it measures up! Bear in mind it's kind of meant to be a bit hodge-podge BUT I haven't intentionally used anything that I didn't think fitted in so if there's any mixing please point it out to me as it's probably a mistake. Any other feedback again lay it on me as this is only my first submission of my first claim!

Edit : Forgot to say, this is dependant on Map 1 for some reason :( Didn't realise until 90%+ finished! Lady N said there's a program to fix this but didn't say what so haven't done it. Sorry!
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Post by Thrignar Fraxix »

TESDTK, please fix this problem and post again to submit it
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Post by Munty »

Ok here's the new ESP, clean and dependency free (hence the name!) I don't know the process from here onwards but I'd like to take another claim as soon as I can. I guess I need reviewing first though right?
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Post by Thrignar Fraxix »

well, once this is in review you can claim another, but I will probably give your interior an unofficial once over before I grant it.
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TESAME: Dirty

Fits exterior: Yes



Northmarker set: Yes
Loading errors: No



Review:
- Claim was dirty.
- Two spellbooks is too much in this int. I deleted one of them

Comments I'm not sure what to make of this int.

Rating 6 / 10
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Post by Thrignar Fraxix »

Doesn't fit the exterior, and the modder is gone. (also, not sure about paintings)
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Just finished my last two claims, and I'd like to take a shot at this one, looks fun. I'll probably do some playing around with it before I decide offically what to do to make it look right. Starting from scratch.

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Granting.
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Haven't done an update yet. I like to do them since I'll be slow making these due to RL business, but I want to show that I am making progress. :)

Finished the arcitecture ages ago, been working on furni and decor today. Here are three pics; cellar, kitchen and main room.

[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v642/massalinie/i4-1641.jpg[/img]

(Sorry for the pixelatedness)
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Post by Thrignar Fraxix »

got an update? No post in a week = revoke, but you know that.
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Post by Thrignar Fraxix »

fuck, I missed this one
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Post by Aeven »

Claiming so Kragenmoor (to my knowledge) is finally finished. Will make a reception area which seems to be rich and elegant, the other (locked) areas of the house will both smallish and feature either de_rm based on the room. I imagine there to be male Dunmer here, and his son, his wife having left him for a richer, higher ranking Hlaalu noble in Narsis (would be nice to see this reflected in NPC'ing when the time comes)
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Granting.
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Post by Aeven »

Done. The manor is sparsely detailed beyond the main room, which explains the file size. It it's WAY too sparse, send it back.
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Post by Thrignar Fraxix »

I'm guessing this still does need to be sent to review
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Post by Katze »

TESAME: Clean

Fits exterior: Yes



Northmarker set: No
Loading errors: No



Review: -No northmarker. Added one.
-common_shirt_02_r was floating slightly
-"Illegal to sleep" not checked
-various shards of broken pottery did not rest realistically, rotated to fix.

Comments Good concept, some errors

Rating 7/10
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Post by Thrignar Fraxix »

Approving, somewhat sparse but that is appropriate
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