i6-77-Hla

Thrignar Fraxix · Post by **Thrignar Fraxix** » Sat Aug 22, 2009 9:33 am

Claim type: Interior
Claim ID: TR_i6-77-Hla (#2186)
Faction: Hlaalu
Parent claim: TR_6-5-Hla (#188)
Claimed by: Cupa Jango
Status: Approved (Progress: 100%)
Local map: Narsis Ferry
Location: 1:(946, -6775):0
Files: TR_i6-77-Hla_Cupa Jango_1.esp; TR_i6-77-Hla_Thrignar Fraxix_1.esp

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#11 Guard tower (de_rm)

Cupa Jango · Post by **Cupa Jango** » Sat Oct 17, 2009 10:26 pm

With this claim I am going to make a guard tower, as that is what the description says. This interior will probably have a small armoury and some bunks for the guards to sleep in.

Thrignar Fraxix · Post by **Thrignar Fraxix** » Sat Oct 17, 2009 11:05 pm

granting, happy modding

cire992 · Post by **cire992** » Sun Oct 18, 2009 3:37 am

Good luck, and congrats on the promotion.

Cupa Jango · Post by **Cupa Jango** » Mon Oct 19, 2009 6:09 am

I think it's done!
I had a good look for floaters and bleeders, and didn't find any, then play tested it.

Thrignar Fraxix · Post by **Thrignar Fraxix** » Mon Oct 19, 2009 6:12 am

off to review with this then (Since this is someone's first claim I'd appreciate a speedy review)

Katze · Post by **Katze** » Mon Oct 19, 2009 6:27 am

TESAME: Clean

Fits exterior: Yes

Northmarker set: No
Loading errors: No

Review: -NO NORTHMARKER >.<
-Furn_Uni_Spearholder_01 floated about a foot off the ground, as did the two spears it contained
-front door was forgotten
-swords on the rack needed rotating slightly

There seems to be a bit too much variety in tapestries to me. Some are too brightly coloured to be a guard post.

Otherwise fine

Comments One or two elementary errors, but this is a first interior, so I think this can be forgiven. Just remember to learn from whatever's posted in reviews.

Rating 6.54/10

Cupa Jango · Post by **Cupa Jango** » Mon Oct 19, 2009 7:14 am

Just after I posted it I realized that I had forgotten the front door!
I didn't see the spears, so I'll fix them.
I thought the swords would need a little more rotation, I'll get rid of some of the tapestries (I saw that allot of the tapestries in one of the Balmora guard towers were the same) and I completely forgot the north marker, I'll fix this stuff up and probably post the fixed version soon.

Andres Indoril · Post by **Andres Indoril** » Mon Oct 19, 2009 7:22 am

Cathartis fixed it already, I believe.

Cupa Jango · Post by **Cupa Jango** » Mon Oct 19, 2009 7:24 am

So I don't need to fix it and re-post it?

Katze · Post by **Katze** » Mon Oct 19, 2009 7:27 am

Generally, if it's not atrocious, the reviewer will fix all the errors.

If it was so bad that I couldn't be bothered to fix all the errors, then you would have gotten it sent back, and be expected to fix it up and resubmit it. I tend to give architecturally interesting interiors more leeway on this.

This doesn't mean you can be lax on your painstakingly trying to avoid having errors though!

Cupa Jango · Post by **Cupa Jango** » Mon Oct 19, 2009 7:29 am

Cool! Don't worry, I'll still try to avoid mistakes.

Thrignar Fraxix · Post by **Thrignar Fraxix** » Mon Nov 16, 2009 6:42 am

I suppose it is fine, but try to stick with one style of tapestry. random styles is bad. (as in colors and designs)