The Greatness' Showcase: now an interior!

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Yes, but TR aims to be better (and is better, apparently).
I would love to do an int in their standards, I could bleed bookshelfs into rugs and a lot more! :D

Edit:

Alright, I had a look:

upstairs:

-com_sack_02 bleeds into com_sack_02
-do you really think misc_com_broom_01 could stand like this?
-light_de_lantern_09_128 is not placed properly
-bk_ShortHistoryMorrowind is half-floating
-bk_vivecandmephala slightly bleeds into the surface
-p_fortify_health_q needs to be rotated
-Misc_Com_Bottle_08 needs some rotation
-TR_misc_dice float

downstairs:

-misc_de_basket_01 is half-floating
-misc_de_bowl_01 really slightly
-ingred_ash_yam_01 don't look right;they should at least not bleed
-you need to rotate ingred_comberry_01 a bit; that is not because of de_p, but many ingredients need to be slightly rotated to rest naturally.
-misc_com_bottle_01 is half-floating three times
-misc_com_metal_plate_04 is half-floating
-you need to totate your cutlery a bit
-misc_com_bottle_02 is half-floating
-light_de_candle_13 slightly bleeds into the surface
-misc_de_bowl_01 needs some slight rotation
-misc_de_bowl_redware_03 is half-floating
-misc_com_redware_platter is half-floating

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Your tapestries bleed into the walls; I also think Praedator told you to use some different ones as well.
You've cluttered well, and I like that file. Your rotation skills are really good, and looking at the amount of clutter you have on your shelves, this error list is a good result. Really. (ok, it might look like a lot to fix, but it actually isn't). About three quarters of the list are the rotation errors I found, and I usually don't list them.
As I sad, if you fix these, I will recommend you at once. You have the skills! So I'm looking forward to seeing your next file! happy modding :D
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How was I suppost to notice this? It was an edit!

Anyway, I've fixed the rotation errors but I don't know what to do about the tapestries. They either bleed into the wall or you get an ugly bit of rope sticking out (try moving one) so I went for bleeding slightly. I also already have used different tapestries, I used tapestry_09 downstairs and tapestry_10 by the stairs and upstairs, but like I said it's very subtle. Do you want me to use different coloured ones or something?

I also hope to have a quest claim soon as I'm going to pesker BC to move the Fighter's Guild quests into unclaimed, so interiors aren't really I priority. I'm also not sure I can stand much more rotation.
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oh sorry iI edtied really shortly after the message, so I thought you would see that :? :mrgreen:
However, you should just move out the tapestries a bit. IIRC, your file was really good so just fix the smal errors and I will recommend you.
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Should you be able to see the rope? I tried to do it how Beth did it, I would compare it to TR work if we'd got to a Hlallu bit.
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Yes you should be able to see the rope and the knot.
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What about the ones by the entrance? When they're low enough to not bleed they're sunk into the floor. The best solution I can find is to have the knot bleeding a little into the ceiling but hidden above the beam, but you'll have a go at me for doing that.
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how about resizing?
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Post by Why »

Do you have to be able to see a tapestry's robe and knot? Beth used them in many ways, check for instance Balmora, Council Club. I think "as long as it looks good" is a way better rule here.
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Why wrote:Do you have to be able to see a tapestry's robe and knot? Beth used them in many ways, check for instance Balmora, Council Club. I think "as long as it looks good" is a way better rule here.
I kind of agree here. I did mine like the Balmora ones and it doesn't really matter that the stick is bleeding a little because you can't really see it and it looks nice. I thought we tried to make it look like vanilla as well.

EDIT: Well, anyway, here's the final version of my showcase. I hope I've fixed all those problems satisfactorally. personally I don't like the tapestries as much this way, but whatever works for you.
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Post by Thrignar Fraxix »

yeah, if it looks reasonable and good then it is fine.
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excellent job, TG. the tapestries look perfectly fine now.

upper floor:

-both de_p_closet_02_de_mclot and active_de_p_bed_11 are bleeding slightly into the wall. No clue how I missed these before.

downstairs:

-misc_com_wood_knife bleeds

that's it! your rotational skills are good. Some slight errors can be fixed in reviewing. IMO, you are good enough to pass the showcase.

Modder has a Scamp recommendation

I leave the rest up to TF, I really hope he doesn't find too many errors :mrgreen:
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Post by Thrignar Fraxix »

de_p_closet_02_de_mclot bleeds into wall
active_de_p_bed_11 REALLY bleeds into the wall
com_sack_01_chpfood5 needs to bleed more
That knife bleeds

Not bad, I'll promote you for interiors. You know the drill (ask questions if you have them)
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ho congratz. (even though you are already a modder)
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Post by Kiteflyer61 »

The second promotion feels just as good as the first. :)

Congrats again Greatness. :D
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Post by The Greatness »

Ooh, excellent. Not as good as the first I'd say, but that may be diluted by the fact that I won't be able to mod until Saturday. Anyway, that's fantastic, thanks for that, I look forward to a bit of good old-fashioned interior modding when I get back to my computer.
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