4-34-Red

Post by **Haplo** » Thu Oct 21, 2010 10:09 pm

It seems I have totally missed the shacks/hut until now. Please take a screenshot and post it here so we can haz deliberation.

Thrignar Fraxix · Post by **Thrignar Fraxix** » Mon Oct 25, 2010 2:09 am

Revoked

Post by **Haplo** » Thu Nov 25, 2010 1:21 am

Locked temporarily until 4-11 and 4-25 are claimed.

Post by **Haplo** » Sun Nov 28, 2010 8:11 pm

Unlocked.

Katze · Post by **Katze** » Mon Nov 29, 2010 12:54 pm

Claiming. First things first, those awful square-section roads need fixing. Other than that, general detailing and awesome-making.

Nemon · Post by **Nemon** » Mon Nov 29, 2010 1:04 pm

Granted, see thread for admin confirmed info if it's not in the top description.

No moar ext claims? Nooo.

Nemon · Post by **Nemon** » Mon Dec 27, 2010 10:12 pm

Close to having to update this, how is this progressing?

Katze · Post by **Katze** » Mon Dec 27, 2010 10:31 pm

Too much other stuff to do at the moment, don't think I have time for this right now. Revoke please :/

Nemon · Post by **Nemon** » Mon Dec 27, 2010 10:34 pm

Revoked as per post above :( .

Sir Dave · Post by **Sir Dave** » Tue Dec 28, 2010 11:57 am

Claiming,

Concerning the roads:
I will stick to the previously proposed plan for the roads.

Concerning the landscape:
This claim has, in some cells, quite a sudden transition from RR stuff to WG and AI stuff. I will change this into RR to better match the surrounding claims.

I see a small body of water in the south which has no matching border with the other claim. I will remove this.

Nemon · Post by **Nemon** » Tue Dec 28, 2010 2:31 pm

Granted, have fun and border match for proper landscape. Killing the water is ok. Try having some elevation in the four middle cells.

Sir Dave · Post by **Sir Dave** » Wed Jan 12, 2011 10:32 pm

Here's a WIP-update,

things I've done so far:

- WG rock and AI textures with GL ones.
- erroneous flora removed.
- the river to the north now has a spring.
- paths ajusted so they now follow the latest plan.
- the layout for the landscape has largely been made

Remaining work:

- further detailing.
- I'll probably do some more work on the roads.

If anyone has comments on this let me know them.

Scamp · Post by **Scamp** » Thu Jan 13, 2011 5:48 pm

Ohh, this looks like RR, nice stuff.

Sir Dave · Post by **Sir Dave** » Sun Jan 30, 2011 10:19 pm

Since it's been a while, another WIP-update:

I've done a lot of detailing since the last update and the claim is now allmost done. I will probably add a little more stuff here and there.

As allways, I'd like to hear your thoughts on this.

Sir Dave · Post by **Sir Dave** » Thu Feb 03, 2011 12:59 pm

Done.

Interiors for the interior makers:

- Cave: -13,-14
- Cave: -15,-14
- Tomb: -12,-14
- Farmhouse: -12,-14
- Village, 5 interiors: -14,-13

Katze · Post by **Katze** » Thu Feb 03, 2011 1:57 pm

Awesome, sending to review.

Nemon · Post by **Nemon** » Thu Feb 03, 2011 2:04 pm

I just had a quick glance at it, it looks very good. Nice overall setup, good detailing and border matching as far as I could see.

One thing to fix though, in the little village: -14 -13: Add some sort of support under the barrel, bucket and stool next to one of the shacks. They be flyin'.

Tyrion · Post by **Tyrion** » Fri Feb 04, 2011 4:47 pm

I'll take care of these things in review then

Should have a review up tonight or tomorrow depending on how much time I get tonight.

Tyrion · Post by **Tyrion** » Sat Feb 05, 2011 6:04 pm

TESAME: Clean

Fits exterior: Yes

Northmarker set: Yes
Loading errors: No

Review: very good

a few things to take note of: watch that you don't bleed shrubs and plants into rocks

make sure you rotate some plants to match the terrain, you don't need to do this for all plants, just some to make a landscape look a little more natural

Comments All in all this is a very nice claim. Sir Dave has a good way of making natural terrain. It appears very natural, visually interesting with some nice focal points, and very professional.

The little village had a great feel to it as well.

Great job!

Rating 9/10

Post by **Haplo** » Fri Feb 11, 2011 8:33 am

Very nice claim, Sir Dave. Approved.