Next time, wait a week before you bump again.
My previous review was actually looking at Angelina's house. Tbh, most of the reviewing is looked at in the CS. Basically it's looked at meticulously how you place objects on surfaces, and usually how to see if the lines surrounding the box are looking properly dotted.
Here's a little guide that Predator taught me, and it's been very useful:
There is a fine line between bleeding and floating. On straight surfaces the coloured object box needs to be dotted all around, then it is placed perfect.
On uneven surfaces you cannot always place it so that all lines are dotted. However if two opposite lines or corners are dotted, the item stands in a gully, and is placed fine.
If only one line/corner is dotted it means you have half a floater, it touches on one side and floats on the other.
If three lines are dotted you are safe, and the object is placed well.
If a line or corner cannot be seen, it is bleeding.
To place the items well, you should rotate them so that the lines are dotted as above, rotate, raise and 'f' until the required lines are dotted.
If you cannot accomplish an item to be place well, use another item (small ones are always good), or avoid placing stuff at that space.
I'm really not feeling well, but someone else will be glad to clarify any further questions you have. Basically we look at the boxes. And if they're not okay, we look at how the object is placed.
For Suran Tradehouse:
Lighting is nice, North Marker present, right boxes ticked, good job. It fits a shell too, nice.
So I've got minimal complaints on this one. However you've only got 3 pieces of furniture (2 if you discount the table which just has a book on it) which showcase you ability to rotate items properly, and 2 of them are the same. I think that this isn't enough to warrant a promotion - if you can fix the errors I've got below, and replace the lower Chest of Drawers with a bookcase crammed with clutter, I'll give you a recommendation.
Your other errors are:
-the bottom of the misc_com_bottle_02 aren't resting properly on the barrel.
-The planter with the Fire Fern can lose the grass.
-Minor, but replace the 'misc_com_metal_plate_04' with a de_whatever bowl.
-The paper lantern upstairs on the drawers is kinda bleeding.
And that's it. There isn't much criticism, but tbh there isn't much to assess. Please stick in a bookcase and really clutter the crap out of it - see other people's promoted showcases for an idea about what TR is looking for.
For Angelina's House:
-I can see how the exterior works, but it's unorthodox.
-Lighting is good in the first room, but ditch the random blue paper lantern. Seems bombastic in the second - spread the lanterns out and maybe half them, because you've got plenty of candles to light.
-Northern Marker is present with the ITSI box ticked, good.
This interior is too big, because it's not cluttered as well as it should be. I'd stick to your Suran Tradehouse showcase, and stick the bookcase from this one into that one.
The bookcase:
-The misc_de_pot_blue_01 are placed well, good job. You need to make all your objects sit somewhat like this.
-misc_de_goblet_06 are sinking (rotate them to the left)
-misc_de_pitcher_01 is sinking (rotate them to the left)
-misc_de_bowl_01 is sinking (rotate to left)
-misc_de_pot_glass_peach_01 are floating (left) and sinking (rotate to the left)
-Delete one of the chests and put something else in the way (the one on the right is placed well)
-misc_de_pot_redware_01 could be placed better
-The bottom shelf is good.
The rest of the first room is good besides a few errors:
-The second sack (com_sack_02_chpfood3) could be sunk for realism.
-The table is actually floating, and everything on it besides the misc_com_bottle_06 and the cutlery aren't placed that well. Also, throw out the metal plate for a Dunmer once since it's style mixing otherwise.
The placement on your (furn_de_p_table_05) is excellent btw.
Second floor:
-furn_de_p_table_01 and its items on top are placed really well.
-The Corkbulb Root is placed really well too
Other than that, there's not really much going down in there. You could collapse the room to 3x2 and probably fit a large amount of the contents into a more confined space to further show off your spacial awareness skills.
So, in closing, I'd recommend you stick to your first file (Suran Tradhouse), and clutter it more and fixing the minor errors you have. Both of your houses are good but they really lack the immersion due to lots of gaps in the placement of items. Stick in that bookcase and try to pay particular detail to your placement with the rotation - use the lines as a guide.
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