q2-28-Imp

Post by **arvisrend** » Tue Oct 09, 2012 6:06 am

Dialogue fixed by LadyN's suggestions. Most of the edits were added commas (you have far too few of them, zobator) and removed "though"'s (of which there were too many).

Post by **Haplo** » Tue Oct 09, 2012 4:01 pm

Whenever you complete a final review and are ready to approve the quest, arvisrend, please add that final file to the top of the thread instead of in the post. (From what I gather you haven't had a final file yet, so it's not an issue, just a heads up)

Post by **arvisrend** » Tue Oct 09, 2012 4:33 pm

Ah, right. I think Why should do the finalling though, just because someone else should have a look at it.

Post by **arvisrend** » Tue Oct 09, 2012 9:11 pm

Merged into the Mainland, approved with minor fixes:

17:06:55 Why: Why actually search for the culprit when there is always a Dunmer to blame? -> when you can set up a Dunmer as your scapegoat?
17:06:59 Why: that's really all I'd change
17:07:10 arvisrend: wow, thanks
17:07:21 arvisrend: so other than that, the q2-28 dialogue is fine?
17:07:25 Why: yup
17:09:37 arvisrend|mainland: "when there is a Dunmer to scapegoat" might even be more succinct
17:09:54 Why: good

Thanks, Zobator, for this claim: a good job.