Claim type: Interior
Claim ID: TR_i4-486-Red (#2685)
Faction: Redoran
Parent claim: TR_4-36-Red (#246)
Claimed by: sasquatch2o
Status: Reviewing (Progress: 90%)
Local map: 4-36 Village
Location: 1:(-1590, -1316):0
Files: TR_i4-486-Red_sasquatch_1.esp; TR_i4-486-Red_sasquatch_2.esp; TR_i4-486-Red_sasquatch_3.esp; TR_i4-486-Red_sasquatch_4.esp
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(-13, -10) Home of a kwama miner. See #5 Local map.
The person who lives here is in charge of the mine, but isn't much richer, if at all.
i4-486-Red
Moderators: Seneca37, Andres Indoril, Lead Developers
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Yeti
- Lead Developer
- Posts: 2061
- Joined: Sun Feb 15, 2009 11:50 pm
- Location: Minnesota: The Land of 11,842 Lakes
Some comments:
This is pretty well-cluttered overall, given that it's still a wip.
What's up with the "aa" at the start of the interior name? It should be called TR_i4-486-Red.
The corner of the hut with the two bottle sitting on the floor is a tad barrne. Perhaps place a large pot and some baskets on the floor near the bottles.
The circular table is also a tad empty.
Perhaps place some more clutter on top of the five crates on the top floor?
furn_de_p_chair_02 at 4265, 4334, 15139 is bleeding into the table.
misc_com_bottle_12 at 4103, 5409, 15161 is bleeding into the wall.
misc_com_broom_01 at 3922, 4437, 15148 is bleeding into the ground. I understand the logic with this, but I think the bleeding is still excessive.
sc_paper plain at 4184, 4305, 14916 is bleeding into the surface.
furn_de_p_stool_02 at 4179, 4370, 14870 is bleeding into the cushion.
furn_de_p_bench_03 at 4339, 4324, 14870 is bleeding into the floor.
crate_02_food at 4172, 4293, 14880 is bleeding into the rug.
The three cushions beneath the stairs are bleeding into the wall.
The corner with the three bottles on the floor near the hammock could use a little more clutter.
TR_cont_De_vase_01_ingr at 4614, 4101, 14848 is bleeding into the mat.
com_sack_02_chpfood3 at 4541, 4114, 14866 is bleeding a little too much into the mat.
Overall, this is shaping up nicely, but be mindful of bleeders.
This is pretty well-cluttered overall, given that it's still a wip.
What's up with the "aa" at the start of the interior name? It should be called TR_i4-486-Red.
The corner of the hut with the two bottle sitting on the floor is a tad barrne. Perhaps place a large pot and some baskets on the floor near the bottles.
The circular table is also a tad empty.
Perhaps place some more clutter on top of the five crates on the top floor?
furn_de_p_chair_02 at 4265, 4334, 15139 is bleeding into the table.
misc_com_bottle_12 at 4103, 5409, 15161 is bleeding into the wall.
misc_com_broom_01 at 3922, 4437, 15148 is bleeding into the ground. I understand the logic with this, but I think the bleeding is still excessive.
sc_paper plain at 4184, 4305, 14916 is bleeding into the surface.
furn_de_p_stool_02 at 4179, 4370, 14870 is bleeding into the cushion.
furn_de_p_bench_03 at 4339, 4324, 14870 is bleeding into the floor.
crate_02_food at 4172, 4293, 14880 is bleeding into the rug.
The three cushions beneath the stairs are bleeding into the wall.
The corner with the three bottles on the floor near the hammock could use a little more clutter.
TR_cont_De_vase_01_ingr at 4614, 4101, 14848 is bleeding into the mat.
com_sack_02_chpfood3 at 4541, 4114, 14866 is bleeding a little too much into the mat.
Overall, this is shaping up nicely, but be mindful of bleeders.
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TESAME: Clean
Fits exterior: Yes
Northmarker set: Yes
Loading errors: No
Review: Grid Snap: Ok
North Marker: Ok
Lights/fog/ambient settings: Ok
Illegal to sleep here: No (should be 'yes').
Review:
TR_misc_dice -- float
sc_paper plain 3982, 3686, 14927 -- float
active_de_p_bed_10 -- slightly floating
crate_02_food 3708, 4055, 14880 -- bleeding to the crate next to it
furn_coals_hot -- bleeding thru the fireplace
light_logpile10 -- bleeding thru the fireplace
orange_fire_128_f -- deleted, no need for two light sources here, the light_logpile10 has this covered
Comments Good job fixing the errors. Nice int. Do remember that if you want you can use our TR_furn_de_p furniture set which is easier to work with due to nice, flat surfaces) rather than the vanilla furn_de_p set.
fixed below
Rating
Fits exterior: Yes
Northmarker set: Yes
Loading errors: No
Review: Grid Snap: Ok
North Marker: Ok
Lights/fog/ambient settings: Ok
Illegal to sleep here: No (should be 'yes').
Review:
TR_misc_dice -- float
sc_paper plain 3982, 3686, 14927 -- float
active_de_p_bed_10 -- slightly floating
crate_02_food 3708, 4055, 14880 -- bleeding to the crate next to it
furn_coals_hot -- bleeding thru the fireplace
light_logpile10 -- bleeding thru the fireplace
orange_fire_128_f -- deleted, no need for two light sources here, the light_logpile10 has this covered
Comments Good job fixing the errors. Nice int. Do remember that if you want you can use our TR_furn_de_p furniture set which is easier to work with due to nice, flat surfaces) rather than the vanilla furn_de_p set.
fixed below
Rating
- Attachments
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- TR_i4-486-Red_sasquatch_4_Rats.esp
- (22.17 KiB) Downloaded 322 times
Clean: Yes
Northmarker: Present
Lighting: Good
Illegal to Sleep Here: Yes
Floaters:
food_kwama_egg_01
furn_log_04
ingred_bread_01
sc_paper_plain
T_IngFood_MeatGuar_01
Bleeders:
com_sack_02_chpfood3
furn_de_p_bench_03
furn_de_screen_guar_01
Other:
Replaced _UNI bread refs with ordinary ones.
Uploaded to new site.
Northmarker: Present
Lighting: Good
Illegal to Sleep Here: Yes
Floaters:
food_kwama_egg_01
furn_log_04
ingred_bread_01
sc_paper_plain
T_IngFood_MeatGuar_01
Bleeders:
com_sack_02_chpfood3
furn_de_p_bench_03
furn_de_screen_guar_01
Other:
Replaced _UNI bread refs with ordinary ones.
Uploaded to new site.