Deadly waters - Dreynim Spa quest

DestinedToDie · Post by **DestinedToDie** » Mon Mar 17, 2014 12:06 am

Swimming in the spa the player will encounter a drunken nord named Alfhed Half-mind.

Greeting:

*Burp!* Eh, there, traveler! Enjoying the warm water as as I am? What do you say, shall we have a little fun?

fun:

Let's make a bet. A hundred gold says I can hold my breath longer than you.

That's a bet!
I'm not up to it.

You submerge into the water and so does Alfhed. Unfortunately, he doesn't last long and drowns.

On his body you won't find any gold. He is naked, after all. But in his underpants (this part won't be mentioned in the game), the player will find a key.

The key opens the cabinet on the upper floor (this already exists) that contains various beverages.

The drowning of this client sparks a few rumors.

Latest rumors:

I heard about someone who drowned at the insertlocationhere. I can't imagine how. The water's only knee-deep.

Latest rumors:

They say the ghost of someone who drowned now haunts here and drags unsuspecting people under water. I'd think twice about taking a swim if I were you.

someone who drowned*:

Can't even relax anymore. The moment that guard smells the breath on me, he sends me away to sober up. I don't think I'll visit next year.

someone who drowned**:

A very unfortunate accident. To avoid further incidents, we ask of you not to drink when visiting the waters. You are still free to make use of our bar.

*Client relaxing in the waters.

**Dialogue from a worker at the spa. Perhaps the first one you meet at the entrance?

DestinedToDie · Post by **DestinedToDie** » Mon Mar 17, 2014 12:07 am

I'm used to very polite speak. Maybe someone can help me make the dialogue sound like he's more drunk?

DestinedToDie · Post by **DestinedToDie** » Mon Mar 17, 2014 12:18 am

This quest has been scrapped because a drunk Nord is not suited for being found in a spa for rich people.

wollibeebee · Post by **wollibeebee** » Mon Mar 17, 2014 12:24 am

I was raised around drunks, so here goes:

"*Burp*" wolli, yew werhh an accident!!!"

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*Belch!* Hey, erh, hail friend! You liking this water, the warm water, as *hick* as am I? How about, I say, how about we have us some fun.

"Let's have a bet. Is a hundred gold for me if I can hold my breath longer than *hick* you."

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*Belch*!* Eyyh-there, trav-*hich*-ling friend!! Are yhu likin' the, this, the warm water here as much as I be? What yhu say?, shall w'ave a little fun? Haha! *Blech*

Let's 'ave a bet, *hick* a bet. A hundred gold! from yhu, to myself! If I can hold my breath longer than yhu can, eh!

I dunno. Not sure what the rules are on slurred speach (but I'm always like Hagrid style dialog...)

Also, I love this little quest.

wollibeebee · Post by **wollibeebee** » Mon Mar 17, 2014 12:27 am

DestinedToDie wrote:This quest has been scrapped because a drunk Nord is not suited for being found in a spa for rich people.

Drunk-naked-nords are Social-Media's stereotypes for rich people.

DestinedToDie · Post by **DestinedToDie** » Mon Mar 17, 2014 12:52 am

I like the dialogue!

I'm just going to wait for a green light on this.