i4-488-Red

[Aeven]

Claim type: Interior
Claim ID: TR_i4-488-Red (#2687)
Faction: Redoran
Parent claim: TR_4-32-Red (#241)
Claimed by: adamantum
Status: Reviewing (Progress: 100%)
Local map: 4-32 Village
Location: 1:(-2171, -2770):0
Files: TR_i4-488-Red_adamantum_1.esp; TR_i4-488-Red_adamantum_2.esp; TR_i4-488-Red_adamantum_3.esp

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(-17, -21) Supplies trader. See #2 Local map.

[Exovian]

I guess I'll try this *slightly* smaller claim. I'm thinking it would just be a fairly basic shop with quarters for the owner, but having sundries on display might compete with the inn next door. Anything in particular you want it to carry? Clothes (it is next to snow), weapons (as it is close to a daedric ruin, form the map)?

Also, on the last claim I tried, there was some question on which file for the interior to depend on. What should be the parent for this one?

[Aeven]

Granting. This place doesn't sell weapons.

[Aeven]

Any update on this one?

[Yeti]

Have you had a chance to work on this yet, Exovian?

[Yeti]

Please post here in the next week, or this will be revoked.

[Exovian]

Please revoke. It's become clear I can't keep up with this and my classes at the same time.

[Yeti]

Revoked.

[adamantum]

I'd like to claim this. Since I did i4-487 and i4-489, I'd do this one in a similar style. Cracked walls in the basement, some evidence of daedra worship, shop on top floor, regular stuff.

[Yeti]

Granting.

[adamantum]

A smallish update. Slooooooooowly working on this. The basic layout is mostly finished, on to the finer detailing now.

[adamantum]

Almost finished. I have yet to playtest it and possibly make some minor modifications or add some new stuff.

[adamantum]

Finished. I decided not to add the basement and use the regular redoran hut shell. I've used ashlander style banners, so I guess the trader that lives here should have some ashlander background (ex-ashlander that decided to leave the clan etc.). As with the other two huts from the village, there is also a small improvised daedric altar.

[Aeven]

Off to review!

[RyanS]

TESAME: Clean

Fits exterior: Yes



Northmarker set: Yes
Loading errors: No



Review: Clean: yes
Ambient/Sunlight/IllegaltoSleepHere: good/good/checked
Northmarker: set
Fits Exterior: yep
CorrectTileset: yes
Containers: good
Books: good
Items Rotated Enough: alright
In-Game: good

REVIEW:

Bleeders:
-ingred_fire_salts_01 into sc_paper plain
-TR_furn_de_p_table_04 into wall
-in_ashl_tent_banner_03 into ceiling
-furn_de_p_chair_02 into floor
-TR_urn_03_food into wall
-TR_urn_02_food bleeding into TR_urn_01_food
-misc_de_basket_01 into hook
-furn_redoran_shelf1_01 into wall
-common_belt_01 into shelf
-common_belt_05 into shelf
-furn_de_screen_guar_01 into furn_redoran_hearth_02
-pot_01 into hook
-misc_de_pot_redware_04 bleeding into book
-bk_onoblivion bleeding into TR_bk_OldManAshlands_WW
-TR_urn_04_food bleeding into furn_de_screen_guar_01
-light_de_candle_05 into table
-Misc_Com_Redware_Cup into table
-Potion_Local_Brew_01 into table
-misc_de_goblet_06 into table
-misc_com_wood_spoon_01 into table

Floaters:
-All 3 sc_paper plain over TR_furn_de_p_table_04
-light_de_candle_ivory_01_64
-both misc_com_bottle_06 over crate
-common_shirt_04 above bed
-common_pants_03 above bed
-bk_BookOfDaedra over in_dae_rubble_01c
-furn_redoran_hearth_02 over floor
-misc_com_redware_platter over hearth
-light_de_candle_ivory_01_64
-Misc_Com_Redware_Cup over hearth
-3 ingred_saltrice_01 over hearth
-Misc_DE_pot_redware_03
-misc_com_bottle_10 above furn_de_p_table_06
-misc_de_goblet_08 above table
-all 3 misc_com_redware_plate over table
-misc_de_goblet_01 over table
-misc_com_wood_fork over table
-misc_com_wood_knife over table


Other Issues:
-misc_com_redware_vase was rotated on the wrong axis, on a shelf.
-both common_amulet_04 and common_amulet_02 were improperly set on shelf
-misc_com_broom_01 was oddly placed in bucket
-sunk com_sack_02_saltrice_10 further into the crate
-moved around a few of the cushions to keep them from over-bleeding


Comments Nice Redoran hut. It would be appreciated if a little more time could be spent on properly rotating objects, but overall I really liked the layout.

Rating 8 out of 10

[Tes96]

Before I do a final review, is this a shop? All the description says is "supplies trader". Or perhaps supplies the inn next door? There's nothing else close by in the exterior except a daedric ruin.

[RyanS]

Yes, this is a shop.

[Tes96]

TESAME: Clean

Fits exterior: Yes



Northmarker set: Yes
Loading errors: No



Review:
Final Review


-Added health to weapons/armor
-Moved bucket/broom against wall
-Raised a few of the stacked redware plates so that they wouldn't look so smashed together
-Removed ownership from pot_01
-Added light_logpile_177
-Rotated ingred_hound_meat_01 on redware tray
-furn_de_screen_guar_01 bleeding
-Adjusted furn_de_rope2_01
-Moved light_de_lantern_03_128 further down rope

Comments

Yes, this is a shop.

So "supplies" in this context is a noun and not a verb? How does he make any significant amount of money way out here in the middle of the snowy Velothi mountains?




I left the Ashlander tapestries and daedric rubble blocks for this person's Daedra praying. He must have had lots of help hauling those blocks up the mountain side. This NPC used to be an Ashlander but left the nomadic life to make a living as a general merchant who trades with adventurers and pilgrims who pass through here.



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