Claim type: Interior
Claim ID: TR_i4-484-Red (#2683)
Faction: Redoran
Parent claim: TR_4-36-Red (#246)
Claimed by: sasquatch2o
Status: Reviewing (Progress: 90%)
Local map: 4-36 Village
Location: 1:(-1580, -1333):0
Files: TR_i4-484-Red_sasquatch_1.esp; TR_i4-484-Red_sasquatch_2.esp
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(-13, -10) Home of a kwama miner. See #3 Local map.
i4-484-Red
Moderators: Seneca37, Andres Indoril, Lead Developers
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Yeti
- Lead Developer
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- Joined: Sun Feb 15, 2009 11:50 pm
- Location: Minnesota: The Land of 11,842 Lakes
I'm not a reviewer or anything, but this looks like it could use some more clutter. Something more along the lines of [url=http://scamp.blogspot.com/2011/06/tamriel-rebuilt-i3-689.html]this interior[/url] made by Scamp back in 2011 would be more fitting in terms of the number of objects to put in.
It's great that you want to take on a lot of claims, sasquatch, but there's no need to rush yourself.
Oh, and from now, please make sure the name of each of your future interiors starts with TR_ consistently.
It's great that you want to take on a lot of claims, sasquatch, but there's no need to rush yourself.
Oh, and from now, please make sure the name of each of your future interiors starts with TR_ consistently.
-Head of NPCs: [url=http://www.shotn.com/forums/]Skyrim: Home of the Nords[/url]
TESAME: Clean
Fits exterior: Yes
Northmarker set: No
Loading errors: No
Review: Ambient/Sunlight/illegal-to-sleep-here: ok/ok/yes
Northmarker: No (Added)
Fits the exterior (Shape/Size/Door/Windows): Y
Loading errors: N
Correct TileSet: Y
Books: None
Container Contents: ok
Items Rotated enough: ok
CHANGES MADE
FLOATERS
furn_coals_hot (5054, 5757, 12870)
ingred_bread_01 (4975, 5691, 12874)
ingred_bread_01 (4976, 5704, 12874)
ingred_hound_meat_01 (5133, 5742, 12854)
ingred_scrib_jelly_01 (4958, 5728, 12862)
misc_com_wood_fork (4551, 5734, 12841)
misc_com_wood_fork (4662, 5528, 12862)
misc_com_wood_knife (4958, 5748, 12861)
misc_com_wood_spoon_02 (4972, 5790, 12862)
sc_paper plain (5109, 5473, 12872)
TR_Ingred_Meat_Guar (5132, 5752, 12854)
TR_misc_pan_01 (5144, 5686, 12852)
tr_misc_stn_jug (5100, 6011, 12800)
BLEEDERS
food_kwama_egg_01 (4856, 5460, 12893) into basket – not positioned realistically
food_kwama_egg_01 (5117, 5716, 12860) into pan
furn_de_basket_01 (4870, 5462, 12889) Into shelf
furn_de_cushion_round_02 (4584, 5662, 12798) into floor
furn_de_cushion_round_02 (4597, 5854, 12798) into floor
furn_de_cushion_round_07 (4597, 5856, 12820) into cushion
light_de_candle_07_64 (4538, 5807, 12857) into base
light_de_candle_09_64 (4540, 5693, 12858) into base
miner's pick (5139, 5488, 12874) Handle into shelf
misc_com_wood_knife (4549, 5738, 12841)
misc_com_wood_spoon_01 (4667, 5529, 12861)
misc_de_basket_01 (4975, 5701, 12860) into hearth
misc_shears_01 (4918, 5930, 12864) into crate
TR_w_cook_knife_01 (4953, 5751, 12861) into hearth
MINOR FLOAT
misc_com_bottle_06 (4650, 5508, 12876)
MINOR BLEED
ingred_scrib_jerky_01 (4543, 5757, 12841)
ingred_scrib_jerky_01 (4547, 5751, 12840)
miner's pick (5157, 5496, 12873)
misc_com_iron_ladle (5110, 5969, 12856)
misc_de_bowl_redware_03 (4654, 5526, 12860)
Potion_Local_Brew_01 (4644, 5558, 12873)
CASPERING
ingred_bread_01 (4968, 5695, 12874)
OTHER ISSUES
misc_de_bowl_redware_02 (4958, 5728, 12860) too much bleeding
misc_uni_pillow_01 (4898, 6057, 12855) too much bleeding
pot_01 (4969, 5825, 12875) too much bleeding
furn_mist512 (4893, 5700, 13034) box shows
ingred_bread_01 (4982, 5698, 12874) not resting realistically in basket
light_de_lantern_06_128 (4930, 5752, 12932) not in hook
light_de_lantern_07_warm (5168, 5967, 12972) adjusted angle to realistically sit on hook
misc_de_bowl_redware_02 (4546, 5718, 12840) adjusted angles
ITEMS ADDED
common_shoes_06 at foot of bed
furn_redoran_shelf2_01 at foot of bed
TR_common_shirt_01 on new shelf
common_pants_07 on new shelf
common_ring_01 on crate
common gloves to hearth
misc_com_wood_cup_02 to top of kegstand
ITEMS REMOVED
light_de_lantern_06_128 (5054, 5813, 12889) it was inside hearth
Flame Light_64 (5076, 5759, 12888) not needed
Corrected file is below
Comments You are the first person to actually use the smoke that I know of – good work, and the mist was a nice touch too.
But I can tell this was one of your first interiors. Hopefully, item placement will improve with experience. Look over the changes made.
DO NOT COPY ITEMS FROM OTHER CELLS. Most items belonged to Braynas Hlervu. I have removed ownership of all the items in the interior. Please go through ALL your other interiors and be sure that ownership has been removed. I will revoke any future interiors I review if they have ownership issues. Just don't copy items from other cells – look at them, of course, to see what items might be in there – or how to put stuff together – but then grab the item from the Object Window and do the int yourself. [note that a lot of MW interiors would not pass for TR interiors]
Furn_de_cushions are not like pillows or sacks. Think of them as being filled with “Buckwheat†or “Strawâ€Â. There is a little give – but still kind of hard. Only tiny amounts of bleeding are allowed, if necessary.
The place did seem a bit too sparse, so I added a few items.
Rating 6 out of 10
Fits exterior: Yes
Northmarker set: No
Loading errors: No
Review: Ambient/Sunlight/illegal-to-sleep-here: ok/ok/yes
Northmarker: No (Added)
Fits the exterior (Shape/Size/Door/Windows): Y
Loading errors: N
Correct TileSet: Y
Books: None
Container Contents: ok
Items Rotated enough: ok
CHANGES MADE
FLOATERS
furn_coals_hot (5054, 5757, 12870)
ingred_bread_01 (4975, 5691, 12874)
ingred_bread_01 (4976, 5704, 12874)
ingred_hound_meat_01 (5133, 5742, 12854)
ingred_scrib_jelly_01 (4958, 5728, 12862)
misc_com_wood_fork (4551, 5734, 12841)
misc_com_wood_fork (4662, 5528, 12862)
misc_com_wood_knife (4958, 5748, 12861)
misc_com_wood_spoon_02 (4972, 5790, 12862)
sc_paper plain (5109, 5473, 12872)
TR_Ingred_Meat_Guar (5132, 5752, 12854)
TR_misc_pan_01 (5144, 5686, 12852)
tr_misc_stn_jug (5100, 6011, 12800)
BLEEDERS
food_kwama_egg_01 (4856, 5460, 12893) into basket – not positioned realistically
food_kwama_egg_01 (5117, 5716, 12860) into pan
furn_de_basket_01 (4870, 5462, 12889) Into shelf
furn_de_cushion_round_02 (4584, 5662, 12798) into floor
furn_de_cushion_round_02 (4597, 5854, 12798) into floor
furn_de_cushion_round_07 (4597, 5856, 12820) into cushion
light_de_candle_07_64 (4538, 5807, 12857) into base
light_de_candle_09_64 (4540, 5693, 12858) into base
miner's pick (5139, 5488, 12874) Handle into shelf
misc_com_wood_knife (4549, 5738, 12841)
misc_com_wood_spoon_01 (4667, 5529, 12861)
misc_de_basket_01 (4975, 5701, 12860) into hearth
misc_shears_01 (4918, 5930, 12864) into crate
TR_w_cook_knife_01 (4953, 5751, 12861) into hearth
MINOR FLOAT
misc_com_bottle_06 (4650, 5508, 12876)
MINOR BLEED
ingred_scrib_jerky_01 (4543, 5757, 12841)
ingred_scrib_jerky_01 (4547, 5751, 12840)
miner's pick (5157, 5496, 12873)
misc_com_iron_ladle (5110, 5969, 12856)
misc_de_bowl_redware_03 (4654, 5526, 12860)
Potion_Local_Brew_01 (4644, 5558, 12873)
CASPERING
ingred_bread_01 (4968, 5695, 12874)
OTHER ISSUES
misc_de_bowl_redware_02 (4958, 5728, 12860) too much bleeding
misc_uni_pillow_01 (4898, 6057, 12855) too much bleeding
pot_01 (4969, 5825, 12875) too much bleeding
furn_mist512 (4893, 5700, 13034) box shows
ingred_bread_01 (4982, 5698, 12874) not resting realistically in basket
light_de_lantern_06_128 (4930, 5752, 12932) not in hook
light_de_lantern_07_warm (5168, 5967, 12972) adjusted angle to realistically sit on hook
misc_de_bowl_redware_02 (4546, 5718, 12840) adjusted angles
ITEMS ADDED
common_shoes_06 at foot of bed
furn_redoran_shelf2_01 at foot of bed
TR_common_shirt_01 on new shelf
common_pants_07 on new shelf
common_ring_01 on crate
common gloves to hearth
misc_com_wood_cup_02 to top of kegstand
ITEMS REMOVED
light_de_lantern_06_128 (5054, 5813, 12889) it was inside hearth
Flame Light_64 (5076, 5759, 12888) not needed
Corrected file is below
Comments You are the first person to actually use the smoke that I know of – good work, and the mist was a nice touch too.
But I can tell this was one of your first interiors. Hopefully, item placement will improve with experience. Look over the changes made.
DO NOT COPY ITEMS FROM OTHER CELLS. Most items belonged to Braynas Hlervu. I have removed ownership of all the items in the interior. Please go through ALL your other interiors and be sure that ownership has been removed. I will revoke any future interiors I review if they have ownership issues. Just don't copy items from other cells – look at them, of course, to see what items might be in there – or how to put stuff together – but then grab the item from the Object Window and do the int yourself. [note that a lot of MW interiors would not pass for TR interiors]
Furn_de_cushions are not like pillows or sacks. Think of them as being filled with “Buckwheat†or “Strawâ€Â. There is a little give – but still kind of hard. Only tiny amounts of bleeding are allowed, if necessary.
The place did seem a bit too sparse, so I added a few items.
Rating 6 out of 10
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Yeti
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Seeing as how Sasquatch's account was suspended several weeks ago (check out the first page of the Forum Archives to see why), this unfortunately won't be the case. In the future, it probably won't be necessary to be as thorough pointing out advice for improving his interiors when reviewing them, unless it's being sent back for another modder to fix.seneca37 wrote: But I can tell this was one of your first interiors. Hopefully, item placement will improve with experience. Look over the changes made.
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