q2-19-Imp

Why · Post by **Why** » Tue Jan 22, 2013 1:02 am

In that case, I'm moving this to finished, good work. Merge this into the next version of TR_Mainland?

Post by **Haplo** » Tue Jan 22, 2013 5:00 am

I've attached a commented dialogue review in .docx format with some things that need to be fixed. Same as the other quest claim. If no one else wants to do it, I can make the fixes myself and upload a fixed .esp; it's only 30 small changes or so.

Why · Post by **Why** » Tue Jan 22, 2013 3:37 pm

So this one should also still be in reviewing? I'm confused, I'll stop touching buttons now. Please do implement those changes if you've got the time, haplo or anyone else, I'm super busy and generally not paying attention here. My apologies.

edit:
About your review, "ain't" is fine and actually better here as far as I'm concerned, the guy's a lighthouse keeper, not a librarian, and this is speech, not literature. It gives him character, and besides, vanilla uses it too. Other than that, good stuff. Skah is implementing it, after which I'm gonna consider this thing finalized and move it to finished. We'll catch other remaining issues after it's been merged.

Stryker · Post by **Stryker** » Tue Jan 22, 2013 4:51 pm

Done. All changes made except what Why mentioned above and the desire to change "shifty looking" to "shift-looking".

srsly, dude, nobody is gonna say that. It's silly.

Should be all ready to go with this, then.

Post by **arvisrend** » Tue Jan 22, 2013 5:29 pm

Merged into Mainland. Once again, great work everyone!

Post by **Haplo** » Tue Jan 22, 2013 10:58 pm

Oops. I accidentally left the y off of the shifty-looking correction. The words should remain "shifty" and "looking" as they are now, but it definitely needs to be hyphenated. I'll make arvisrend aware of this for when he next works on mainland.

Post by **arvisrend** » Wed Jan 23, 2013 12:11 am

Haplo wrote:Oops. I accidentally left the y off of the shifty-looking correction. The words should remain "shifty" and "looking" as they are now, but it definitely needs to be hyphenated. I'll make arvisrend aware of this for when he next works on mainland.

Fixed.