i3-592-Imp

[Bero]

TESAME: Clean

Fits exterior: Yes



Northmarker set: Yes
Loading errors: No



Review: Review:
Floaters
common_pants_03
common_glove_left_01
common_glove_right_01
misc_com_plate_03 (4575, 2328, 16651) all 3 of them are wrong
steel katana
sc_paper plain (ones on table 4)
also books on same table
silver cutlery
common_shirt_02_hh
common_shirt_04_b
common_shirt_05
common_shirt_07
expensive_ring_02
steel spear
steel longsword
iron_helmet
silver arrow
plates
and some more stuff

Bleeders
furn_com_rm_table_04
light_com_lamp_01 (4552, 2974, 16650)

Other Issues
Windows and entrance door are kinda wrong (someone else should look into this)
flasks should bleed into table a little

Items Added
Blacksquares

The file below has all of these corrections.




Comments I’m too lazy to name all the locations.
Exterior has 2 more windows (odd ones) and door has wrong angle but someone else look into this.

Rating 6 out 10

[Seneca37]

TESAME: Clean

Fits exterior: No

Missing some windows - these have been added.

Northmarker set: Yes
Loading errors: No



Review: Ambient/Sunlight/illegal-to-sleep-here: ok/ok/yes
Correct TileSet: yes
Books: ok
Container Contents: ok
Items Rotated enough: ok
In-game Map: ok
Locks/Traps: Added lock to upstairs door.
Check Lights: ok
GRID PATH: done

CHANGES MADE

FLOATERS
apparatus_a_mortar_01 (4586, 2789, 16141)
misc_com_bottle_02 (4498, 2282, 16122)
misc_com_broom_01 (4499, 2288, 16157)

BLEEDERS
iron bolt (4483, 2466, 16066)
iron bolt (4483, 2468, 16066)
iron bolt (4483, 2470, 16066)
iron bolt (4483, 2472, 16066)
iron bolt (4483, 2474, 16066)
iron_helmet (4504, 2532, 16074)
p_restore_health_c (4539, 2843, 16081)

MINOR FLOAT
active_com_bed_04 (4484, 2835, 16543)
com_closet_01_g1 (4148, 2652, 16594)
common_shirt_02_hh (4492, 2729, 16066)
furn_com_rm_bookshelf_02 (4477, 2288, 16101)
hammer_repair (4495, 2848, 16066)
light_com_lamp_01 (4552, 2974, 16650)
silver arrow (s)
TR_bk_YilgamsehVolumeXI (4231, 2959, 16575)
tr_furn_com_rug_ay01 (4386, 2370, 16512) – rugs be 0.05 to 0.10 above floor
tr_furn_com_rug_ay02b (4245, 2664, 16513)
chest_small_01_goldr500 (4518, 2602, 16072)

MINOR BLEED
Gold_005 (4244, 2935, 16570) Into table
misc_com_silverware_knife (4504, 2865, 16312) Into table
repair_journeyman_01 (4493, 2821, 16066) Into bar
short bow (4494, 2450, 16067) into bar
silver dagger (4486, 2534, 16066) Into bar
steel longsword (4488, 2573, 16067) Into bar
steel spear (4473, 2564, 16067) Into bar
TR_bk_RealMeaningofLife (4479, 3001, 16588) Into windowsil

OTHER ISSUES
Sacks needed to bleed a bit more in general
ex_common_door_01 (4228, 2984, 16098) had teleport to Balmora
Furn_Com_RM_Bar units had overlapping issues
in_c_wall_plain (s) needed some slight repositioning
in_imp_fireplace_grand (4154, 2373, 16514) moved back a bit
misc_flask(s) needed to bleed a bit more
misc_imp_silverware_plate(s) at odd angle – repositioned.

ITEMS REMOVED
Changed out urn for basket.
Removed some of the bar units – there was an issue walking behind the bar. The items on the bar were repositioned, or moved to the bay window.

ITEMS ADDED
I added a whole storage area, and made sure all the windows were in.
Added a couple of additional weapons.
A couple of chandeliers and sconces were also added.


Changes made are in the file below


Comments Not bad for a first interior. This probably should have been sent back for rework, if it hadn't sat so long in the queue, and the urgency to get OE going. I made the necessary changes.

What a bizarre exterior. Those windows in the alley are nuts.

Rating 7 out of 10

[Bero]

I only found one minor float (common_robe_01) and broom was resting on one point. Great job seneca37.