i3-718-Imp

[arvisrend]

@reviewer: please replace the container com_chest_02_fg_supply by the TR_com_chest_02_fg_sup from the new TR_Data.esm.

[Not]

TESAME: Clean

Fits exterior: Yes



Northmarker set: Yes
Loading errors: No



Review:
TR_i3-718-Imp

TR_FGnote needed to be moved closer to the wall

tr_furn_com_rug_ay05 was floating slightly? I don't know, I was getting weird errors with that one, I'll leave that to the HoR to decide

furn_com_rm_bench_02 bled slightly

misc_com_silverware_fork_uni was floating slightly

furn_com_rm_chair_03 (x2) bled into floor

TR_bk_MarasTear bled into the book case just a tad

bk_OnMorrowind was floating slightly

misc_flask_01 bled

TR_furn_bottleB_b02 was floating

steel longsword needed to be rotated a tad

com_chest_02_v_weapon03 bled into the floor

replaced com_chest_02_fg_supply with TR_com_chest_02_fg_sup as per arvisrend's request

TR_i3-718-Imp Basement

misc_de_cloth10 (x3) was floating

BM wolf right gauntlet needed to be rotated slightly

iron saber needed to be rotated a bit

com_chest_02_v_weapon03 was floating

steel claymore needed to be rotated

Comments Very nice indeed. This has got to be one of the best interiors I've seen! Excellent job, and perfect for the main HQ of the FG.

Rating 10/10

[Thrignar Fraxix]

just realized that due to WAY too many files, the last file wasn't actually the one reviewed. Can you take a look between the last two files and see if any differences weren't re-added by your review please?

[arvisrend]

Changes from file 10 to (newer) file 1:

(1) The text of the book tr_fgnote is now:

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<DIV ALIGN="CENTER"><FONT COLOR="990000"><BR>
ATTENTION!<BR>

Notice to all Fighters Guild members. <BR>
<BR>
<DIV ALIGN="LEFT"><FONT COLOR="000000"> <BR>

All Guild members are hereby reminded: While in use of the training area, it is the responsibility of each member to clean up all blood spilled from his or her own body. No exceptions! Contrary to what many seem to believe, unconsciousness will NOT be accepted as a valid excuse!! <BR>
<BR>
If There are any issues with this, please bring them to the attention of Guild Management.<BR>
<BR>

-Guild boss <BR>

Note: I don't consider this a good change (it involves adding allcaps and exclamation marks). I also don't consider this a good note.

MAIN CELL:

(2) Moved a book. Before:

NAME: Name:TR_bk_slavetrade
DATA: X:3783.10 Y:1304.42 Z:12021.64 X_Angle:0.00 Y_Angle:0.00 Z_Angle:4.71

After:

NAME: Name:TR_bk_slavetrade
DATA: X:3784.18 Y:1302.32 Z:12021.64 X_Angle:0.00 Y_Angle:0.00 Z_Angle:4.71

(3) Moved a bottle. Before:

NAME: Name:Misc_Com_Bottle_14
DATA: X:4387.82 Y:1077.88 Z:12228.63 X_Angle:6.11 Y_Angle:1.57 Z_Angle:0.28

After:

NAME: Name:Misc_Com_Bottle_14
DATA: X:4387.82 Y:1077.88 Z:12228.30 X_Angle:1.57 Y_Angle:2.74 Z_Angle:4.60

(4) Removed an ingredient:

NAME: Name:TR_Ingred_Meat_Boar
DATA: X:4185.03 Y:1068.64 Z:11773.85 X_Angle:0.00 Y_Angle:0.00 Z_Angle:0.79

(5) Moved a piece of bread: Before:

NAME: Name:TR_Ingred_Bread_03
DATA: X:3792.37 Y:935.90 Z:12279.52 X_Angle:0.00 Y_Angle:0.00 Z_Angle:4.51

After:

NAME: Name:TR_Ingred_Bread_03
DATA: X:3760.54 Y:979.66 Z:12279.52 X_Angle:0.00 Y_Angle:0.00 Z_Angle:5.51

(6) Removed a chest:

NAME: Name:com_chest_02_v_weapon03
DATA: X:3771.07 Y:-579.00 Z:12245.91 X_Angle:0.00 Y_Angle:0.00 Z_Angle:3.93

(7) Removed a chest:

NAME: Name:com_chest_02_v_weapon01
DATA: X:3752.30 Y:1092.92 Z:12245.91 X_Angle:0.00 Y_Angle:0.00 Z_Angle:0.00

(8) Removed a chest:

NAME: Name:com_chest_02_v_weapon01
DATA: X:4296.98 Y:1095.68 Z:12245.91 X_Angle:0.00 Y_Angle:0.00 Z_Angle:0.00

(9) Removed a chest:

NAME: Name:com_chest_02_v_weapon01
DATA: X:4028.88 Y:1094.33 Z:12245.91 X_Angle:0.00 Y_Angle:0.00 Z_Angle:0.00

(10) Added some chests:

NAME: Name:com_chest_02
DATA: X:4030.87 Y:1091.36 Z:12245.91 X_Angle:0.00 Y_Angle:0.00 Z_Angle:0.10

NAME: Name:com_chest_02_empty
DATA: X:4298.48 Y:1097.84 Z:12245.91 X_Angle:0.00 Y_Angle:0.00 Z_Angle:6.18

NAME: Name:com_chest_02_misc05
DATA: X:3758.49 Y:1094.91 Z:12245.91 X_Angle:0.00 Y_Angle:0.00 Z_Angle:0.00

NAME: Name:com_chest_02_v_armor11
DATA: X:3771.80 Y:-579.66 Z:12248.41 X_Angle:0.00 Y_Angle:0.00 Z_Angle:3.93

BASEMENT:

(11) Removed shield:

NAME: Name:TR_a_wood_shield
DATA: X:3438.32 Y:3925.74 Z:12251.67 X_Angle:0.79 Y_Angle:3.14 Z_Angle:3.14

[Tyrant]

Comments Very nice indeed. This has got to be one of the best interiors I've seen! Excellent job, and perfect for the main HQ of the FG.

Rating 10/10

Now that is some high praise to be sure, especially considering the other extremely well made interiors throughout this project! But I will graciously accept the compliment! Thank you!

[Thrignar Fraxix]

approving, use my file.

Almost nothing was on the weapon racks right, lights were FAR too bright, and naming conventions for new items weren't followed. Still a good int though.