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Post by Thrignar Fraxix »

I'd really prefer you make a normal house with de_p furniture if you feel you must try out for interiors again. We have almost no barrows, and they aren't the best way to show off skills.
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Wow fast reply, I was about to PM you actaully o.O

I'd very much prefer to be an Int Modder as well, as techniqually I need to be to add in, and fix up Interiors when putting them into Exteriors.

Alright then, I guess then, I will make a... hmmm.. Hlaalu House with de_p furniture in it then?

(By any chance, just for the hell of it, could I still get the other Int looked at as well? I did try make it somewhat different from other barrows.)
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RelinQ wrote:I'd very much prefer to be an Int Modder as well, as techniqually I need to be to add in, and fix up Interiors when putting them into Exteriors.
Actually, no. You shouldn't be doing that. Have you been doing that much? I need to know so I can go review every single claim in your old detailing claim. I'm not very happy about you doing that as you had no reason to think you should have been doing that.

I'm not going to review your barrow because I have 35 more interiors to final, it is after 3am, I already reviewed 37 interiors today, and through a combination of fatigue and sheer horror at the line I quoted I can barely even type coherently.
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Any interiors I fixed within my old Exterior claim was to correct problems generally listed by you.

I fixed up i3_149, by adding a hallway between the domes and a entrance corridor, because as you said, you cant have doors entering into a dome.

I also fixed up the Old Keep interior i3_153 by moving one side of the fort to align with the other side, because whoever the hell made it, did a crappy ass job and didnt use gridsnap and on top of that it was using TR_OoT.esm as well.

I've only ever touched other interiors with the intent of fixing issues people address to me.
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...I told you to fix the exterior. The interior did not appear to be merged. As it stands the interior will probably need a redo. Adding a hallway before the dome is not sufficient.

TR_OoT was what you were supposed to use when that place was made, we've changed files since. You can't fault the original modder for that. As for everything else, sounds like I need to revoke that too.
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Post by RelinQ »

Hlaalu Int - DE_P

Let me save you some time:

GRIDSNAP SET: Yes
NORTHMARKER SET: Yes
Interior Lighting Set: Yes
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Sadly, I'm way too lazy to do a full review, however, there is a few things I've noticed.

First of all. What exterior does your interior fit if any?

What is the function of the place? It seems oddly mixed.

Why do the residents/patrons of the place leave their money lying around on the tables? O_o Seems kinda weird.

You have an egg lying in a bowl with a spoon under it. How's that supposed to be eaten? Why's there weapons, armor and books lying around in a bar area together with the glasses.

Do your residents not like pillows? There is none on any of the beds.

The planter in the foyer is nice (A bit tall though), but does it really fit in a poor interior?

The bar area is nicely cluttered, but some of the other areas are very barren. The two side bedrooms have 2 shelfs with nothing on them but 1 candle, and the upper floors have nothing in them except some plants and tapestries.

Lastly it seems you still need to rotate some stuff. You've rotated most stuff it seems, but there is still a few items you've missed.

Edit: Just so I dont sound all negative. I actually quite like your int. The bar area looks very nice and alive, except for the few oddities I mentioned.
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Considering I made most of this exterior under the influence of something and was never told to fit it to an exterior, I will remove the cell and fit it to an exterior.
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Well, your interior needs to fit inside some sort of building. Otherwise there would be nowhere to place it!
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Post by RelinQ »

Okay here is a new int.

Hlaalu Int - DE_P

Gridsnap set: yes
Northmarker set: yes
Interior Lighting set: Yes
Fits exterior building: Yes


This interior should fit the exterior static: ex_hlaalu_b_17.

Interior name is: "000 Relinq Showcase"
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There are probably too many rugs and tapestries in your interior considering it's supposed to be poor. There's also little to no variation in rugs and tapestries, perhaps try having a different colour upstairs?

It's also incredibly well stocked with alcohol, a poor bar probably wouldn't have this much, and even less likely to have expensive drinks like Cyrodiilic Brandy and Flin. Drinks here would mostly be cheap drinks like Mazte and Shein, with maybe a small amount of sujamma or greef, no cyrodillic brandy or flin at all.

Your object rotation on poor surfaces seems reasonable.

Fix the things I said were wrong and you'll have my recommendation. Good to see you making a mundane interior.
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Post by RelinQ »

Hey, thanks about the rotation, I havent often placed alot of things using DE_p funiture before, so it was a little bit of a challenge at first.

I removed about half the bottles, alcohol and goblets and tidied it up. Changed up some of the alcohol as well, so I have no Flin or Brandy.

I changed the tapestries upstairs, which I dont know why I didn't in the first place because the other int I made yesterday I had. o_O

I've removed a fair few rugs as well.

I also added in a couple of windows for a nice touch. (I really don't use windows enough which is a shame, but then again the caverns I usually make dont really require windows :P)

That should be it.
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Clean: Clean
Gridsnap Used: Yes
Northmarker Set: Yes
Fits Exterior: Yes
IllegalToSleepHere: Yes
Style Mixing: No

Review:

- the misc_de_glass_yellow_01 on the floor is half floating due shape.
- neck of lute doesn't touch the wall
- one Misc_DE_glass_green_01 and one misc_de_glass_yellow_01 shouldn't be rotated, as de_p shelves are actually flat
- misc_de_bowl_bugdesign_01 should be sunk into surface
due pointy bottom
- both misc_de_bowl_orange_green_01 should be sunk in surface due pointy bottom
- com_sack_01_chpfood5 should be sunk a little into surface
- com_sack_02_chpfood3 should be sunk in surface a little.
- Downstairs: too many lights, remove a few lanterns and maybe 1 candle.
- pillow should be sunk in the bed a bit
- common_shoes_03 are floating

Comments:
You have shown that you know about 3D rotation, quite a few items stand allright, but a few still need to be adjusted. I would have expected you to know that bowls and sacks should be sunk. I found the bar area to be rather empty, more clutter would be in place. Overall it is a good interior, but it has potential to be better.
Fix the above listed errors and you are ready for the recommendation.
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okay then, I'll look at those things, and get back to you.

and for the record Cath told me to Reduce my clutter so I wont be adding any more.
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I thought I just told you to reduce the amount of alcohol? Adding more cheap crap is fine. Correct me if I'm wrong.
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Thanks Cath, I believed to have read that too.
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BAM, done.

Tided up what was said

Added some stuff to the bar.

EDIT: some of the bowls and sacks were confirmed by Cath to be fine.
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You have fixed nearly everything, to my opinion the bowls should be sunk a little deeper however. Also a bit too much gold in the open or not behind lock.

That said, I Recommend you for Interior Modder
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I Believe It has been a week, so... BUMP
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Do you want another recommendation? Here it is...

So Thrigwig it's your turn :wink:
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Member re-promoted for interiors

you already know the drill and not to make me regret giving you a second chance. I'm keeping my eye on you though, and the quote in my sig will remain valid for as long as it is there.
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Congrats RelinQ, Welcome back 8)
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Congratulations, and welcome back to the team!
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I did not believe that TF was going to add you in the interior group again.
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I didn't either, but this is once again a testament to how I am actually a nice person.

Doesn't mean I won't put him out on his ass if he fucks up though.
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