i1-30-Tel

Lady Nerevar · Post by **Lady Nerevar** » Sun Sep 25, 2005 4:47 pm

Claim type: Interior
Claim ID: TR_i1-30-Tel (#949)
Faction: Telvanni
Parent claim: TR_1-32-Tel (#54)
Claimed by: The Old Ye Bard
Status: Approved (Progress: 100%)
Location: 1:(3424, 1335):0
Files: TR_i1-30-Tel_Lady Nerevar_1.esp; TR_i1-30-Tel_The Old Ye Bard_1.esp

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very small cave
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v642/massalinie/Tamriel%20Rebuilt/11.jpg

The Old Ye Bard · Post by **The Old Ye Bard** » Thu Sep 29, 2005 10:19 pm

I'll have it done real quick (I don't have school!)

Hermit · Post by **Hermit** » Fri Sep 30, 2005 12:44 pm

As with the other, I'd like t have some idea of what you plan to put in there before granting it.

The Old Ye Bard · Post by **The Old Ye Bard** » Fri Sep 30, 2005 10:09 pm

for this one i'm going to have it overgrown with mushrooms inside and have it very dark lit by a fire in the middle also going to have some bloat spores inside.

Hermit · Post by **Hermit** » Sun Oct 02, 2005 11:44 am

Okay, sounds cool. Please change lighting accordingly! And make good use of light sources and OoT stuff.

Granted. Happy modding!
Recommeded OoT packages:
http://tamriel-rebuilt.org/files/oot/TR_OOT_Main.esm (1.3 MB)
http://tamriel-rebuilt.org/files/oot/TR_EoT_datafiles.rar (7.6 MB)
http://tamriel-rebuilt.org/files/oot/TR_OOT_Main.tar.gz (47.2 MB)
http://tamriel-rebuilt.org/files/oot/TR_EoT.esm (112.6 KB)

The Old Ye Bard · Post by **The Old Ye Bard** » Sun Oct 02, 2005 9:49 pm

o.k. i finished it its a bit differnt to my original idea because my computer froze when i was nearly finished and i had to start all over again.
i'll put the file on a bit later, cause i have to transfer it to another computer for uploading cause my other one doesn't have internet access.

The Old Ye Bard · Post by **The Old Ye Bard** » Mon Oct 03, 2005 10:58 pm

its finished. last minute thing added was an NPC, she is very poor and lives alone. -no dialouge-

Massalinie · Post by **Massalinie** » Mon Oct 03, 2005 11:51 pm

Submitting to review

Lady Nerevar · Post by **Lady Nerevar** » Sun Oct 09, 2005 5:37 pm

1-30

TESAME: nope.

NPC: hm.. where do i start. shes a member of the inperial cult (why the heck would she be in a secluded cave tehn?) her wander is set to 512(the stand) and whiht no pathgrids layed, shell be swimming in teh water in no time. why dose she have an lockpick?
Pathgrids: nonexistant.
oferall:
-i love the use of the telvani roots. and thats wehre the good stuf ends

-the platform on which the npc is supose to "live" is WAY to small. it has a bedrol, a table and chair, a the NPC all on a ex_de_docks_corner_01 paltform
-this int is way to light, mostly because of the high radious lights(and the amount of em)
-teh table is _de, while the stool is _com. they should all be com
-there are WAY to many mushrooms. dosent look natural or right
-the goblet bleeds into the table
-why the fuck is there a skeleton only feet away from the actual NPC?
-why is there a pool? not to mention its the wrong tileset.
-why are there clothier tools on the table? this NPC is not a clothier
-in general, this int looks like you took everything you though was cool and put it all together. its way to crouded, has all kinds of errors(some of which i didnt bother to mention), and looks bad to top. it requires a drastic oferhaul before it can be included. 5
-not at the way it is. needs seriorus fixing and changes.

cwandell · Post by **cwandell** » Fri Oct 28, 2005 9:23 pm

Review of TR-i1-30-Tel

1. TESAME - needs cleaning, many unnescary cell references

II. Loading - Unable to find region "Inner Sea Region" in load for cell "Wilderness", Unable to find region "Molargerd" in load for cell "wilderness". unable to locate enchanting "TR_ml_Acrobat_jump_TA" , Missing object "TR_Barrel_broken02" missing object "TR_Barrel_empty01"

III. General/Logic/Lightning. map should not be linked to the exterior yet, although I was happily suprised to find that you did make an entrance on the outside, for me to stand on. I do agree with Lady N that there should be some explaination for the clother equiptment, but what i found more interesting is why are there so many slaughterfish in such a small pond? my recommendation would be to remove one or more of them, I don't think the population would be substainable as it is.

IV. Main review, there is slight bleeding, the telvanni roots are interesting to look at, but I'm unsure why there there? is there a telvanni tower nearby or some large tree that might create such roots? I noticed the large number of mushrooms, I think that you could do with mild reduction in the number, however that wasn't such a big concern, since its a dark damp place, mushrooms might be growing like that. The platform may need some extension outward, and be alittle more spread out on where things were. prehaps instead of the clother equiptment alchemy aparatuses would be more appropriate for an imperial cult member? Who is this mysterious dead body, why is it there? Why is this cultist a hermit?

V. the mod needs considerable work, but overall looks nice to me. Slight rearangement and corrections to the errors that i detected loading the file, and it should be good.

Massalinie · Post by **Massalinie** » Fri Oct 28, 2005 11:05 pm

caves are allowed to have fishies in them, bethsoft did it in a few places. But i havent' looked at this int myself, so i could be making a comment that really makes no sense

Oh and chris: you need to be laying out your reviews in the same way as the review tool does it remember? also i advise getting firefox, cause parts of the site don't work with IE, but it's up to you.

Lady Nerevar · Post by **Lady Nerevar** » Thu Nov 17, 2005 10:45 pm

[BUMP] is this going to be fixed anytime soon? If you need another copy of the reviews or are unable to fix this claim for any reason, please post in this thread or contact me.

The Old Ye Bard · Post by **The Old Ye Bard** » Tue Nov 29, 2005 4:51 am

really sorry but because of issues with Oot it is impossible to finish, i really love what i did with it but sadly i must ask you to revoke it.

P.S. next person that does this claim could you please use old file because it would be hard for me to see such a nice piece of work go to waste.

Lady Nerevar · Post by **Lady Nerevar** » Sun Dec 11, 2005 6:28 pm

use my file