i4-120-Hla

Post by **Haplo** » Wed May 24, 2006 10:31 pm

Claim type: Interior
Claim ID: TR_i4-120-Hla (#1050)
Faction: Hlaalu
Parent claim: TR_4-1-Hla (#138)
Claimed by: agram
Status: Approved (Progress: 100%)
Local map: Stonefalls (SE)
Location: 1:(179, -2224):0
Files: TR_i4-120-Hla_Sky Captain_1.esp; TR_i4-120-Hla_Thrignar Fraxix_1.esp; TR_i4-120-Hla_agram_1.esp

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South-East Stonefalls, house, claim#53

Sky Captain · Post by **Sky Captain** » Tue Jan 02, 2007 5:01 am

I'd like to claim this. It's going to be the home of a single woman, who has a strange infatuation with soul gems. She is quite old, and enjoys cooking. A dunmer.

Lady Nerevar · Post by **Lady Nerevar** » Tue Jan 02, 2007 5:22 pm

sounde good

please make sure that the more expensive gems are better guarded.

Sky Captain · Post by **Sky Captain** » Tue Jan 02, 2007 7:45 pm

Alright, I'll start right now

Sky Captain · Post by **Sky Captain** » Sun Jan 07, 2007 7:28 pm

I have completed the int

Post by **Haplo** » Sun Jan 07, 2007 7:44 pm

Submitting to review.

Thrignar Fraxix · Post by **Thrignar Fraxix** » Thu Mar 01, 2007 11:21 am

Revoking, interior is nonsensical and lacks neccesary home amenities, while inexplicably including a bowl with skulls in it.

agram · Post by **agram** » Sun May 20, 2007 9:10 pm

I will try this. A house of a old man with a small library, nothing fancy, middle class.

Thrignar Fraxix · Post by **Thrignar Fraxix** » Sun May 20, 2007 9:41 pm

Not granted. You weren't promoted for interior modding, so I will not allow you to have multiple interior claims until you have completed a few, sorry.

agram · Post by **agram** » Mon May 21, 2007 9:31 am

I know i am for exteriors, but all that is left is the aragon jungle, and my pc is too slow for that claims, i cant work on it because of too many trees. If something other opens, i will claim it, but until then, i want to work on interiors. My first int. is finished, so just tell me if it is OK to claim another.

Thrignar Fraxix · Post by **Thrignar Fraxix** » Mon May 21, 2007 4:01 pm

I just didn't want you to have multiple unfinished claims until you had one approved, feel free to claim this one now.

agram · Post by **agram** » Mon May 21, 2007 4:19 pm

As i said, house with a small library, storage, nothing fancy.

Thrignar Fraxix · Post by **Thrignar Fraxix** » Mon May 21, 2007 4:26 pm

Granting, Happy Modding.

agram · Post by **agram** » Mon May 21, 2007 9:20 pm

I wanted to ask if this( see pics ) is ok. I wanted to create a small storage under the stairs.This way the storage follows exterior stairs. If the pics are not good i will upload the entire claim.

Thrignar Fraxix · Post by **Thrignar Fraxix** » Mon May 21, 2007 9:31 pm

that looks kind of cool actually, is there a way you could make the angle more like the stairs? if not then don't worry about it, but yeah, that looks good.

agram · Post by **agram** » Tue May 22, 2007 7:46 am

It's finished.

Thrignar Fraxix · Post by **Thrignar Fraxix** » Tue May 22, 2007 9:10 am

ReVieW me!

Post by **Swiftoak** » Tue May 22, 2007 10:18 pm

TESAME: Clean

Fits exterior: Yes

Northmarker set: Yes
Loading errors: No

Review: Criticals: None
Lighting: Correct
Lore:
Logic: This was a pain to find in the CS. Please always name your interior cells with the correct syntax. In this case it would be "TR_AG_i4-120 Hla" It's easier to find and merge that way.
Main Review:
i. Bottom Floor
-Sacks in the corner didn't look too natural. It's okay to bleed them into each other a little bit, since they droop.
-Added random Zrotation to one of the sacks.
-Empty com_sack_02 on barrel was bleeding into barrel. Fixed by rescaling.
-Table seemed a bit underdetailed. Added some misc items, statics to it.
-Table with lute floated.

ii. Top Floor
-Added zrot to some of the books, moved them a little for a more natural look.
-Pillow floated a little.
-I'm a little concerned about the vast amount of books in just a small commoner's house. I'll let someone else be the judge of this though.

Comments Nicely done, could have used alot more detailing in the bottom floor though. The only thing I'm not too sure about is the amount of books, seems too much for a regular commoner's house. Someone might want to remove some of the rarer ones there. Otherwise, good work. Fix below.

Rating 8

Thrignar Fraxix · Post by **Thrignar Fraxix** » Fri Sep 14, 2007 7:14 pm

Approved.