Type:
Issue
Severity:
Normal
Game version:
Morrowind (Steam)
Concerns:
TR_Mainland
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Status:
Fixed for Version:
Description:
A bunch of typos and issues with unique my trade responses, particularly in Maps 1 and 2.
- Alt Bosara:
- None of the unique responses there had Disposition filters. Set them all to 30.
- "well stocked" -> "well-stocked" and replaced repeat "My waystation" with "it's."
- "the trainings I give are" -> "the training I give is," replaced repeat "my guards" with "them," replaced repeat "Alt Bosara" with "town," "without fatiguing" -> "without getting fatigued," "having strong endurance is key" -> "endurance is key." (Thought it sounded more natural, can be reverted if necessary.)
- "piece of wood of hers" -> "piece of wood she has," "no good criminal" -> "no-good criminal"
- "via" -> "by," "via" -> "with," (Thought it sounded too formal for a shipmaster in a small town.) "I am the best you can get in town." -> "I'm the best you can get in town."
- Decapitalized "Alchemical" and "Restorative."
- Removed repeat "actually."
- "Well I used to be" -> "Well, I used to be"
- "I can repair most weapons and I can make my own iron or steel weapons." -> "I can repair most weapons, and make my own out of iron or steel." Also replaced a semicolon with a period so a sentence wouldn't get too long, and removed "Needless to say, this stability of income is more than a blessing." at the end, because it felt unnecessary and hard to fit in with the new sentence structure.
- "like you yourself" -> "like yourself."
- Surimintu:
- None of the unique responses there had Disposition filters. Set them all to 30.
- "all around" -> "all-around."
- "have good knowledge" -> "have a pretty good idea," "we will never be caught by the Legion" -> "they'll never catch us." (To remove repeat Legion.)
- Replaced colon with period, "I'm the girl" -> "I'm the one," (Felt a bit unnatural.) and "They sink very quickly in this area." -> "They have a tendency to sink."
- Replaced repeat "my cavern" with "this place."
- Andar Mok:
- "like you yourself" -> "like yourself."
- Removed quotes around "entrepreneur" and "equipment" -- it's already clear what Adosi does for a living without the sarcasm. Also "to share my profits with anyone other than myself and my wife." -> "to share my profits with anyone other than my wife."
- Replaced comma with double hyphen.
- Added comma.
- "Explain about our pilgrimages" -> "Explain the purposes of our pilgrimages."
- Fort Windmoth:
- "my trade is over." -> "I don't have a trade anymore."
- "I travel the lands of Morrowind with my guar in search of trade. So far I have not found any of the sort here." -> "I travel Morrowind with my guar in search of good opportunities for trade. So far I haven't found anything of the sort here."
- Replaced repeat "this fort" with "it."
- Capitalized Champion, as it's meant to be the Legion rank.
- "This way I can make some money and spend it all on my... interests." -> "I can use it to make some money and spend it on my... interests."
- Verulas Pass:
- "I perform the weeding. I perform the cutting and the pruning." -> "I perform the weeding, the cutting and the pruning."
- Replaced comma splice with period, and replaced repeat "out of" with "with."
- "that's still empty if you're looking" -> "that's still empty, if you're looking"
- "I can also teach about brawling, if you ever wish to have a go." -> "I can also teach people brawling, if you'd ever like to have a go."
- "but the publican is far too chaotic to make arrangements." -> "but the publican is a bit too eccentric to make reliable arrangements."
- "The work in this mine has to continue, %PCRace. I am here to assure that it continues." -> "The work in this mine has to continue, %PCRace. I am here to ensure that it does."
- Kemel-Ze:
- None of the unique responses there had Disposition filters. Set them all to 30.
- "Expeditiory" -> "Expeditionary."
- Replaced repeat "tourist" in "tourist guide" with "tour." (2x)
- Marog:
- None of the unique responses there had Disposition filters. Set them all to 30.
- Baldrahn:
- "My trade? Well, at the moment, that's kind of just keeping myself alive, if you know what I mean." -> "My trade? Well, at the moment, that's really just keeping myself alive."
- Pansaranit:
- Added an AddTopic "go free" to a slave response that had "go free" in it.
- Ashamul:
- "swit" -> "s'wit."
- "and sell it with a good benefit." -> "and sell it for a good profit."
- "Get my clue?" -> "Get my drift?"
- Gah Sadrith:
- Added comma.
- "I mean, that's what I do at home" -> "I mean, that's what I did at home."
- Port Telvannis:
- "beneath the greater race of the Dunmer." -> "beneath the Dunmer."
- "evey" -> "every."
- Replaced repeat "matters" in "arcane matters" with "the arcane."
- Ranyon-Ruhn:
- Replaced comma splice with period.
- "make the ends meet" -> "make ends meet."
- "but I begin to believe" -> "but I'm beginning to believe."
- Removed second ellipse right after a first ellipse.
- "I do a little magery on the side, just because I have some talent for it, though. But my dream is to be a thief." "I do a little magery on the side, just because I have some talent for it. But my dream is to be a thief."
- "I'm your Elf" -> "I'm your mer."
- "I bet you believe" -> "I bet you think." (Less formal sounded more appropriate here.)
- "I enforce Imperial law and at the same time make sure that the traditional Telvanni customs are not violated in any way." -> "I enforce Imperial law, and at the same time make sure traditional Telvanni customs are not violated in any way." (2x)
- Sarvanni:
- "It pays better than egg mining too." "It pays better than egg mining, too."
- General Map 1:
- Capitalized "Empire" in "the Empire." (2x)
- Replaced repeat "the matrix" with "it." (4x)
- Sailen
- My trade responses had an absurd range of non-standard Disposition requirements. Changed them all to 30 or 0.
- Hlan Oek Surroundings:
- "around fishing pole and net" -> "around a fishing pole and net."
- Bonus: Added a ShowMap "Ammar" to Morvil Arelath's Ammar response.
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