Illicit Inspiration:

• Changed Speechcraft check while intimidating Fjalma to a Level check. (Was 65 Speechcraft, is now Level 15)
• Changed guard disposition for asking about "a new dealer" to 30 instead of 40. Imperial guards tend to still be reasonably cordial at 30 disposition, so it can be hard to tell that they're arresting you because they don't like you, and possibly make you think that it's not possible to turn Neel Gymont in.
• Replaced the Speechcraft check to attempt to convince the guard not to arrest you with a Debate check -- didn't use disposition because accessing it means that your disposition is already below 30. Also in the same line, "Off you go then." -> "Off you go, then."

Removing the Guard:

• Removed some Journal editorializing
• "goings on" -> "recent events"

Rumors:

• "These two ne'er-do-well seem to be an item, if you see what I mean." -> "Those two ne'er-do-wells seem to be an item, if you know what I mean."
• Removed "heh heh heh" from the end of one rumor
• Removed Journal update from Removing the Guard rumor
• Removed Journal update from The Widow and the Sea rumor
• "I hear there is some commotion up in Ranyon-ruhn. (...) I hear Mithras is getting concerned about dissent." -> "I hear there's been some commotion up in Ranyon-ruhn. (...) Maybe Mithras ought to be concerned about dissent."
• "I hear they caught another couple of slaves trying to escape from Port Telvannis. Everybody knows that nobody gets away from there. Serves those foolish slaves right for trying something so ridiculous. They should know that their position is one of servitude. The weak are dominated by the strong. It is the natural order of things." -> "I hear they caught another couple of slaves trying to escape from Port Telvannis. Everybody knows that nobody gets away from there -- serves them right for trying something so ridiculous."
• "'better person'! Pfh!" -> "'better person!' Pah!"
• Removed Journal update from Gah Sadrith Inquisition rumor
• "It shows great foresight on there part, and I look to do a lot of business in Port Telvannis in the future." -> "It shows great foresight on their part, and I look forward to doing a great deal of business in Port Telvannis in the future."
• Double quotes around "great adventurer" changed to single quotes
• "despatched" -> "dispatched"
• "particularity" -> "particularly"
• "We never get them around here though, they wouldn't dare stray so far from their precious Legion." -> "We never get them around here, though. They wouldn't dare stray so far from their precious Legion."
• "A few weeks ago an Imperial by the name of Hasilius Brahn came into town, and gets drunk every night at the Dancing Jug. It's a sad thing to see, but fortunately he never caused trouble." -> "A few weeks ago an Imperial by the name of Hasilius Brahn came into town. Now, he gets drunk every night at the Dancing Jug. He's never caused any trouble, but it's a sad thing to see."
• Removed Journal update from The Sick Strider rumor
• Removed Journal update from Remnants of Resdayn rumor
• "Hlaalu Council Company started paying their egg miners..." -> "The Hlaalu Council Company started paying their egg miners..."
• Removed Journal update from Extrajudicial Punishment rumor
• Removed Journal update from Drinking, Stealing, Ranting rumors
• Removed Journal update from The Ill-Advised Heist rumor
• Removed Journal update from Save a Prayer rumor
• Removed Journal update from The Exiled Duke's Affair rumors, and "if you get the meaning" -> "if you get my meaning"
• "I'm surprised he hasn't just given up--he's been jailed for three decades after all." -> "I'm surprised he hasn't just given up -- he's been jailed for three decades, after all."
• Removed Journal update from The Sorceror's Apprentices rumor
• Removed Journal update from Illicit Inspiration rumor
• Removed Journal update from Rich Pickings rumor
• Removed Journal update from Free From Addiction, But Not From Debt rumors
• Removed Journal update from The Jealous Shopkeeper rumor
• Removed Journal update from To Win a Heart rumors, and deleted the guaranteed rumor that starts it. Replaced with setting his controlQ.
• Double quotes around "annoying" changed to single quotes
• Removed Journal update from You Can't Choose Your Family rumor
• "There haven't been any rumors about me I hope?" -> "There haven't been any rumors about me, I hope?"
• "EXCITING!!" -> "EXCITING!"
• "You don't believe me? Well then look around town and see if you can find one that is alive..." -> "Don't believe me? Just look around town, and see if you can find one that's alive."
• Removed Journal update from Hunting Daedra rumor