The line in his script that disabled him checked for the same journal stage as the one that enabled him, meaning he would be in the Infirmary the whole time, not just if he left the MG during the questline.
Bol Salvani, a former sharpshooter from Narsis who has recently risen to a noble and the ruler of Gol Mok, got involved in wine making industry. His liquor is being made at a southern distillery and delivered by ships to Andothren, with him having nothing to do but watch his ships passing by all day.
Changed the name of the inn mentioned to the correct name, and rewrote the whole line a bit, including to take into account that the inn doesn't have a door. Also added full stops to the choices ("Yes." and "No."), as that's how it's most often done.