In Gindaman's dialogue (Firewatch MG), it would be good to mention that the rank of Magister is required for his quests. Currently, when he tells you "I have no duties for %PCRank", you have no idea when to come back, unlike all vanilla questgivers who always tell you which rank is required for their quests. Also, it might be a good idea to add one more journal id before The Tower of The Enchantress quest, so it won't appear in journal until you reach the rank of Magister and ask Gindaman about duties.