Grammar, style, and lore issues with OE High Rock Mission dialogue

Type: 

Bug

Severity: 

Normal

Game version: 

OpenMW

Concerns: 

TR_Mainland

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Status: 

Fixed for Version: 

Description: 

Lore: given recent developments with the High Rock gridmap, it is no longer accurate to say that HR consists only of seven kingdoms.

Consistency: in her background response, Esolde seems quite fawning of Elysana. However, in the rest of her dialogue responses, she is quite critical of the Queen. Which is it?

Typo: in topic "Orsinium", there should be a comma before 'but'.

Style: in topic "Wayrest", the first sentence is a run-on and should be split. Additionally, the second "due to" should be switched out.

Typo: in topic "Miracle of Peace", there should be the article 'a' before 'near-disastrous conflict'

Style/typo/clarity: in topic "Trade Prince",  the second-to-last sentence should be rewritten. I'd recommend switching out the two underlined 'which' with 'of whom'. The final underlined part of the sentence could read: "...live far from the city or even outside of the kingdom's borders."