Fixed those two and a made a few other tweaks as well. Game now literally playable.

"I surpassed them long ago. Most of them, along with my old superiors in the Dustmoth Legion, rode down to Nivalis with glory in mind, charging with the Duchess into their graves. Then, soon after, Casik's forces collapsed. So they died for nothing, and threw hundreds of soldiers' lives away in the process. I don't let petty honor or glory cloud my judgment. I look out for the survival of myself and my men. That's all that's important."