Most dialogue on topic “inquisition” is awkward but this one in particular:

Here, take these potions of my own making as a reward. They have been made after sacred recipe of Necrom priests, which is known only to those who devouted their whole lifes to fighting enemy of Almsivi. May they fortify your courage next time you have to face some dangerous heathen. Now me and Arelis must go after Ilwen immediately and you can do nothing more for us. Now that we know where evil was hiding all the time, we have a hope of finding it again.

rest could use a proofreading at least.

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Also on TR_m1_GS_MQ_5:
This greeting 1 entry  “Our mission was a success, %PCName. The cultists were slaughtered, and the rituals performed to cleanse the ruin of their foul protection, although some Daedra remain. Good luck in your future endeavors: I will remember your help here. Be sure I will inform my Temple superiors about them.”
tries to set journal to 75. There is no such entry
the dialogue in question looks like a leftover from a previous version and can't be obtainable