It's an abandoned totally inhabited Hlaalu house, edited it to fit Mark's notes. it fits ex_hlaalu_b_23 the lower floor is a basement.
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 Tiefling's Showcase.ESP | 9.52 KB | 2021-01-20 00:11 |
(Reply #1) Posted on Mon, 2021-01-11 22:33
2020-05-23 10:09
1 year 3 months ago
Not an interior reviewer but I gave it a quick look.
BLEEDERS
misc_com_metal_plate_03
misc_de_fishing pole
Other
com_sack_03_saltrice_10 - should bleed into ground a bit
Try to rotate some of the misc items on the shelfs makes it look more realistic - Hold y and right mouse button, just make sure it doesn't start bleeding.
Doesn't fit any hlaalu exterior shells as far as I can tell
Too dark even if it is abondoned and sunlight settings should be lower 10-20. Have a look at the lighting in other hlaalu interiors
Needs a pathgrid have a look at this: https://www.tamriel-rebuilt.org/content/tutorial-pathgridding-tutorial
The cell name should be something like tr_tiefling_showcase read over this page: https://www.tamriel-rebuilt.org/content/tutorial-interior-modding-tutorial
I'll message you on discord with pictures of the bleeders
Again not a proper review and I've probably missed some stuff
2020-07-31 02:09
6 days 7 hours ago
reviewing
2020-07-31 02:09
6 days 7 hours ago
Name: TR_Showcase
Clean: you have made your file dependent on TR_Mainland.esm. The only .esms that should be dependencies are Tamriel_Data.esm, Morrowind.esm, Bloodmoon.esm, and Tribunal.esm. Clean this dependency out with Wrye Mash.
Lighting: Ambient lighting settings are good. The fog settings need to be higher and have a density of 0.75, take a look at other vanilla ints for this setting. Good that the sunlight settings are low, but I’d bump them up just a little bit.
Northmarker: present, rotation is irrelevant
Fits exterior: good, although the basement can stand to be better aligned with the building. This would minimize problems like overlapping with other basements for claims in the future.
Pathgrid: good
Illegal to Sleep Here: no, incorrect. It should be ticked if this is in a town or city.
Gridsnap: good
Bleeders:
Furn_web00 (x2): it’s okay to have these bleeding into things, but this goes straight through a beam and thus looks weird. Rotate/place them in such a way that they don’t bleed straight through the wood beams.
com_sack_03_saltrice_10: sacks should bleed with their flat side, but for this, the bottom part should not be bled into the floor.
furn_de_tapestry_04: this one (on the upper floor) is bled heavily into the wood beam. Move it up so it’s going into the adobe, and make sure that the rope doesn’t bleed. I’d move all the tapestries that are like this up a bit, but they’re technically not all bleeding.
furn_de_tapestry_01: (on the bottom floor) as above
Floaters:
misc_flask_01 (x2): these models have a point at the bottom instead of a flat bottom. As such, they need to be bled a little into the surface in order to look like they’re resting on a flat bottom.
misc_flask_04: as above
misc_flask_02: as above
misc_DE_glass_green_01: is floating a tiny bit on one end
Misc_Com_Pitcher_Metal_01: as above
common_shirt_01_a: need to bleed this a bit to prevent visible floating. Also, this and the pants are for ashlanders only, I suggest changing them for another.
Other:
furn_de_tapestr_02: this is only really used in Temple ints, or if the inhabitant is particularly devout.
You should familiarize yourself a bit more with the other pieces in the in_hlaalu set. You use a lot of in_hlaalu_hall_4way with the one sided walls, when you could be using far less pieces (vanilla has pieces that could replace every single wall + 4way combo. Check them out, experiment, and use them to create that top floor in a much simpler way).
You also use double in_hlaalu_hall_128 when you could be using one piece. Same comment as above.
I can see through the wall coming down the stairs. Either change the stair piece or change the hall pieces to resolve that problem.
Overall, this is severely undercluttered. I understand that it’s an abandoned house, but it’s hard for me to determine if you have the ability to clutter sufficiently. I ask that you clutter this more (more furniture for the empty floor space, rugs perhaps, more misc items for the shelves and tables, more lights, etc.) and turn it into a lived-in house just so I can be convinced you can clutter well. Also, it would be great if you utilized some more T_D items, although that’s not strictly required for a showcase.
There are a lot of things you do well in this showcase, but the above things should be fixed before I recommend you for promotion.
2020-07-31 02:09
6 days 7 hours ago
Review 2
Name: TR_Showcase
Clean: yes
Lighting: Sunlight should be lower; I only said to bump it up a bit from all the 15ish settings you had. Something like 30/25/20 is good for me. Also, you should only really use yellow/orange lights. Blue lights are for alchemists/mages/the like, red lights are usually for cultists, and other colors for other specific situations. Also, the green light has a radius of 256, which is too big for where it is. Choose one with a smaller radius (128 is good). Also, It would be good to add lanterns like this hanging from ropes on the ceiling just for a bit more light (maybe add a lantern near the bottom of the stairs, one in the basement).
Northmarker: present
Fits exterior: yes
Pathgrid: Not updated to the new layout of the basement, make sure you do that.
Illegal to Sleep Here: yes, correct
Gridsnap: good
Bleeders:
furn_de_p_shelf_02 (x2): both these (on the top floor) are now bleeding heavily into the walls (along with some things on top of them) due to the change in shell pieces.
furn_de_p_bookshelf_01: bleeding a little into the bottom trim for the same reason as above.
furn_de_cushion_round_01: bleeding into the wall
active_de_p_bed_11: bleeding into the floor
Floaters:
Other:
common_shirt_04_a: this is still here, and it’s an ashlander outfit. The _a, _e, _u, and _z are all ashlander ones. Also the expensive_01 clothes are ashlander. Just replace this one with another shirt that’s not an ashlander one (maybe common_shirt_01)
This one is much better with the clutter than the previous file, good job! Still a tad undercluttered for a normal claim, but I won’t make you do more. Just fix the problems above and I will recommend you for promotion.
2021-01-11 22:23
2 days 4 hours ago
Added the above fixes.
2020-07-31 02:09
6 days 7 hours ago
There are some discrepencies in the pathgrid (I sent pics on discord) but I'm sure you can fix them, and all of the other issues are fixed, so I'm recommending you for promotion. Congrats!
2016-01-25 21:01
2 hours 2 min ago
Promoted. Congratulations!