Anneryl's Interior Showcase

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Hello all, here's an interior showcase of Anneryl. Please, take a look at it, as he's very eager to get started smiley

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Reviewed.

Name: hlaalu_house_test (when submitting ints we prefer you to start the name with TR_, not a huge issue just makes it easier to find)

Clean: No, needs cleaning with TESAME

Lighting: Ambient is a bit extreme, lower red a bunch, green a bit and raise blue slightly. Try to get a warm brown colour rather than a bright orange. Sunlight is good and low, but avoid repeating the same value 3 times because it just makes greyscale, same with fog values.

light_com_lantern_02_256 is causing greenlight, which is the sickly green colour you get from a light source being too bright or too close to a surface. Swap it out for a less bright version.

The area by the bookcase is very dark, could do with a light over there.

Northmarker: Present, good

Fits exterior: Yes, fits to a b22

Pathgrid: One node is under the guar screen, needs moving.

Illegal to Sleep Here: Yes, good

Gridsnap: Yes, good

Bleeders:
Furn_De_Bed_28, going through the tapestry
furn_de_p_stool_01, into the floor
furn_de_p_table_02, going through the tapestry
furn_de_rug_big_07, into the wall a tiny bit
light_com_lamp_01 x2, into the floor
Misc_Com_Bottle_14, into the shelf, needs rotating so it sits right
Misc_Com_metal_plate_04 x2, into the shelf, need rotating so they sit right
misc_de_glass_yellow_01 x3, needs rotating
misc_spool_01, into the shelf, needs rotating

Floaters:
common_pants_01, this asset has no texture on the bottom, so much always be placed so you cannot see the bottom face from any angle. Otherwise you get caspering, which is where you cna see through an asset from certain angles.
furn_de_p_bench_03
furn_de_p_bookshelf_01, also bleeding into the walls. This asset doesn't fit in that space unless you rescale it slightly.
furn_de_rug_big_06
Gold_001 x4, need rotating so they sit right on the shelf.
misc_com_bottle_06
misc_de_goblet_04, needs rotating
Misc_DE_pot_redware_03
misc_de_tankard_01, needs rotating
T_CyrImp_FurnM_Cl1CmFGC

Other:

Rugs with tassles, such as furn_de_rug_big_06, should be sunk into the floor slightly so the tassles sit on the ground.

Inappropriate asset usage:

infred_bread_UNI3 should be replaced with regular bread. Objects with the UNI tag are unique items meant to be used for specific locations/quests.

Remove the wall chandelier, it's not really designed for this type of int.

misc_com_bottle_07_float x2, assets with the _float tag have scripts that make them bob around as if they're floaitng in water. Swap them out for regular bottles.

misc_com_wood_spoon_01_UNI2 x2. Replace with non UNI tagged spoons.

T_CyrImp_FurnM_Cl1CmFGC. Assets marked with the Cyr tag are assets for Cyrodiil, replace this with one with the MwDe (Morrowind Dunmer) tag.

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Quite a comfy vibe to this int, but I feel it's a little bit empty. Needs more furniture and clutter to fill it out further on top of the fixes in the review.

For cleaning with TESAME, refer to this tutorial: https://www.tamriel-rebuilt.org/content/utility-tesame

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The showcase is fixed!

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There is no fear in love. But perfect love drives out fear,
because fear has to do with punishment. 
The one who fears is not made perfect in love. 1 John 4:18

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Name: hlaalu_house_test. Still not renamed, please rename the cell so it starts with TR_ as well.

Clean: Yes, good

Lighting: No issues

Northmarker: Present, good

Fits exterior: Yes, b22

Pathgrid: One unnecessary node. Node on the stairs is not needed, just connect the one at the bottom straight to the one on the top.

Illegal to Sleep Here: Yes, good

Gridsnap: Yes, good

Bleeders:
furn_de_p_bench_03 into the ground a bit
misc_com_bucket_01, into the shelf above. This is too big to fit under the rescaled bookshelf.
Misc_Inkwell, into the desk

Floaters:
com_sack_01, also bleeding into the bookshelf
furn_de_p_stool_01
All the light_com_lamp_01 except the one on the top floor by the bookshelf
light_com_lantern_01_128
light_de_candle_08_64
misc_com_bottle_07, on the bottom floor bookshelf
misc_com_metal_plate_04 x2
misc_com_plate_07 x2 rotation is just a bit off
misc_com_wood_bowl_04, rotation is just not quite right

Other:

Add more tapestries, most Hlaalu houses have tapestries on nearly every wall. Take a look at other Hlaalu houses of a similar size in Balmora for an example of how many.

Sacks such as com_sack_01 should be bled into the surface they are on top of to make them look soft.

duplicate furn_de_tapestry_04 on the bottom floor looks like it was left in by accident, see image.

To adjust light sources, set your z adjust to 0.1 and lower it.

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Nice update, I am happy with the amount of furniture. Just needs a few more adjustments and a bit of polish. Good progress so far.

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And updated again 😃

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Name: TR hlaalu house

Clean: Yes, good.

Lighting:No issues

Northmarker:Present, good

Fits exterior: Yes, good

Pathgrid:No issues

Illegal to Sleep Here:Yes, good

Gridsnap: Yes, good

Bleeders:

Floaters:
Misc_Inkwell, needs rotating.
furn_de_p_stool_01

Other:

Rescaled misc: misc_com_bucket_01, we do not rescale items that can be picked up by players because it resets its scale in the inventory. Simply delete or move the bucket.

Sacks still need bleeding into the floor slightly.

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Thank you! Another update ^_^

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There is no fear in love. But perfect love drives out fear,
because fear has to do with punishment. 
The one who fears is not made perfect in love. 1 John 4:18

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Perfect, that's a pass. Congrats!

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