Nirvayn's Showcase

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Nirvayn
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Hello, This is my Showcase for Interior Developer, this is my first time doing an interior i hope i did everything like it was asked in the guide

the cell name is TR_Nirvaynshowcase

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reviewing

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reviewed

Name: TR_Nirvaynshowcase
Clean: yes
Lighting: settings good, light_de_candle_04 causing greenlight in the corner, light_de_candle_05 causing greenlight on chest,light_de_candle_10 causing very mild case on wall. pro-tip with candles: generally stick with 64 radius options.
Northmarker: present, good
Fits exterior: as per discord discussion, fits a b_16 outline
Pathgrid: good
Illegal to Sleep Here: yes, correct
Gridsnap: good

Bleeders:
misc_de_foldedcloth00: bleeding slightly into table
hammer_repair: handle slightly bleeding into shelf
misc_com_bottle_02: bleeding on one side (with an object like this its a good idea to use grid angle to get it on the flat, then use the relevent inverted key to rotate it properly.
misc_de_fishing_pole: bleeding through floor
chest_small_01_gold_10: bleeding into shelf
Misc_DE_glass_green_01: bleeding into shelf x2

Floaters:
misc_com_wood_cup_01: floating on one edge
misc_com_redware_pitcher floating on one edge
repair_prongs: front floating slightly
misc_de_lute_01: not fully resting on one side
iron shortsword: blade floating
com_sack_02_chpfood3: should be bled to hide the dark spot
misc_de_pot_mottled_01: floating on one edge

Other: 
the small shelf over the stairs is odd and would be better removed.
ingred_muck_01: dont use this to represent mess, muck is from mucksponge

A good first example, see discord for further comment

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Nirvayn
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Alright, i think i fixed everything from the list, should be ready now for a second review

i changed the exterior shell for the ex_hlaalu_b_22 instead of the ex_hlaalu_b_16 for the doors to be more fitting

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Vern
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reviewed

Name: TR_Nirvaynshowcase
Clean: yes
Lighting: good
Northmarker: present, good
Fits exterior: Fits a b_22 outline
Pathgrid: good
Illegal to Sleep Here: yes, correct
Gridsnap: good

Bleeders:
bk_Anticipations: bleeding on one edge.

Floaters:
misc_de_fishing_pole: not resting on angle that would keep it upright
misc_de_foldedcloth00: sloating slightly over table
common_pants_02: slightly floating over closet
common_shirt_03: floating on one corner

Other: 
the two gloves on top of the closet wouldnt be easily visible ingame as would be a waste of refs

 

Jus finish these last few things and I will reccomend for promotion.

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Nirvayn
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ok, i fixed the last irregularities, should be ready now.

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Vern
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reviewed

Name: TR_Nirvaynshowcase
Clean: yes
Lighting: good
Northmarker: present, good
Fits exterior: Fits a b_22 outline
Pathgrid: good
Illegal to Sleep Here: yes, correct
Gridsnap: good

Bleeders:

Floaters:

Other: 

 

All issues fixed, reccomednign for promotion

"Forum sigantures suck" - a great man