Hi,
Here's my interior showcase. It matches (more or less) the ex_hlaalu_b_17 exterior.
Feel free to review it and please let me know if it's good enough.
You could reach out to me here or in the TR Discord at @Lamberthassel
| Attachment | Size | Date |
|---|---|---|
 TR_interior_showcase_Lamberthassel.ESP | 11.73 KB | 2023-11-12 14:15 |
2021-02-06 12:11
2 weeks 1 day ago
Quick review:
Asset use is good no issues there.
Ambient lighting is a touch too green, should be lowered somewhat. All other settings fine.
Pathgrid almost perfect, middle floor node by the stairs leading to the basement not necessary, basement node can just be attached to the node by the door.
The middle floor shell: Remove the added in_hlaalu_wall and replace the associated in_hlaalu_hall_3way in with an in_hlaalu_hall_center piece. The shelf and objects on it will need to be adjusted slightly to account.
Quite a lot of greenlight caused by light sources being too bright, replace all lights with their 128 variants.
White lights, particularly Light_De_Lantern_06A aren't really used in hlaalu residencies. Replace with a yellow light like the rest.
Could do with a few rugs on the middle floor.
File has TR_Mainland as a master, this needs removing with wrye mash.
Will do a proper item placement pass once these are fixed.
ₒₕ, bₒₒ𝒹?
2023-11-05 17:10
10 months 3 days ago
Thank you for the review.
I also fixed some item placement (I wish some of the Furn_De_p furniture never existed), so it's ready for an item placement check.
2023-11-05 17:10
10 months 3 days ago
I fixed some item placement I forgot the last time, it should look better now.
2021-02-06 12:11
2 weeks 1 day ago
Name: TR_interior_hlaalu_b_17
Clean: Yes, good
Lighting: No Issues
Northmarker: Present, good
Fits exterior: Yes, good
Pathgrid: No issues, good
Illegal to Sleep Here: Yes, good
Gridsnap: Correct
Bleeders:
com_sack_01_chpfood5, bottom floor, into the crate behind it
furn_de_p_chair_02, into the floor
furn_de_p_table_05, into the wall
misc_de_foldedcloth00, top of the stack, into the nearby post
T_De_BookendPoor_01, into the upright book
Floaters:
furn_de_p_shelf_02 x 2, should be bled into the wall slightly
furn_de_rope_03 x 2, these need to be bled into the ceiling wood to hide the untextured ends
furn_de_rug_01 a could inches above the floor
sc_paper plain, paper needs to be double f-dropped then raised slightly
Other:
misc_de_bowl_redware_01 needs to be bled a little bit more.
ₒₕ, bₒₒ𝒹?
2023-11-05 17:10
10 months 3 days ago
Bleeders:
Floaters:
Other:
2021-02-06 12:11
2 weeks 1 day ago
All issues fixed, that's a pass. Congrats!
ₒₕ, bₒₒ𝒹?