Exterior: ex_hlaalu_b_07
Interior is for bottom floor and basement (not top level apartment)
Cell Name: TR_Andiras_Showcase
Bottom Hlaalu apartment with basement. Home to some kind of smuggler or hoodlem.
Thank you for taking the time to review my showcase!
Edit: Updated file since I had not saved my pathgrid :P
2020-12-31 14:03
3 days 2 hours ago
Greetings, and thank you so much for applying. Please, take a look at the feedback below:
Name: TR_Andiras_Showcase
Clean: Yes
Esm dependencies: Ok
Light: Ambient ok, Sunlight ok, Fog shouldn't be at 0.
Pathgrid: The room with skooma could use a second node. So is the nook with a round table near the top entrance. You could also place a node in front of the bed if you scale the bed down to 0.95-0.9 and move it closer to the wall.
Northmarker: Present, correct
Gridsnap: Ok
Illegal two sleep here: Yes, correct
Fits exterior: Doesn't fit ex_hlaalu_b_07. Try another exterior shell. If nothing fits, the interior layout needs to be adjusted to fit one of them.
Floaters:
Bleeders:
Rescaled miscellaneous items: None found, good.
Other:
General feedback: You have a good grasp of item placement. It's just some special cases that need clarification. Your cluttering is good as well, but do not be afraid to place more clutter. It'll get easier when you'll be working with normal furniture.
Kindly fix these issues, and I'll recommend for promotion.
There is no fear in love. But perfect love drives out fear,
because fear has to do with punishment.
The one who fears is not made perfect in love. 1 John 4:18
2023-03-31 04:30
1 year 8 months ago
Thank you for reviewing Denis!
The rest makes sense and I will start the updates, but I had a clarifying question about the fitting the exterior. As mentioned in my message, I built out for the bottom apartment+basement, and left the top apartment out of the showcase. I believe it does fit the portion I noted, but if I need to add the top apartment as well for the showcase, let me know. (Here is a video explanation with visuals, if I am not making much sense https://drive.google.com/file/d/1q4WK2jZi6XA4paIDFKqYBroMfULsu6gN/view?u...)
2020-12-31 14:03
3 days 2 hours ago
Yes, I misunderstood the situation, sorry. Feel free to proceed with the current layout.
There is no fear in love. But perfect love drives out fear,
because fear has to do with punishment.
The one who fears is not made perfect in love. 1 John 4:18