Dacrylis Showcase - TR

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Hello there people! First showcase submissions here, and it's for a smaller Hlaalu style interior.
The place is the residence of a Nord merc or FG member, living the simple life in this somewhat lower class home.

A simple 3x2x2 building, using the Hlaalu b_05 exterior, with a ground and a basement floor
(The extrerior is present simply for reference)

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Reviewed:

Name: 00_dacrylisshowcase, please rename to start with TR_

Clean: No, needs cleaning with TESAME

Lighting: Settings good. Lot of greenlight from assets. Having the lanterns directly under the crossing beams in the ceiling makes them go very green, move them such that the ceiling beams aren't green. Also the candles all need replacing with _64 variants.

Northmarker: Present, good.

Fits exterior: Yes, fits an ex_hlaalu_b_05 (please delete the ext asset from the cell though)

Pathgrid: Perfect, very impressive.

Illegal to Sleep Here: Yes, good

Gridsnap: Yes, good

Bleeders:
crate_01_armor_fur into the back wall
misc_com_bottle_02, into the stool slightly
misc_com_redware_flask, into the shelf quite a bit

Floaters:
misc_de_basket_01
Gold_001, one of the three under the T_De_FurnP_Table_02
misc_com_redware_pitcher
misc_com_redware_platter
misc_com_wood_spoon_01, make sure this one is resting on the lip of the bowl
T_De_Cm_Shoes_03
T_De_StonewareCup_02, on the T_De_FurnP_Table_03, by a tiny bit

Other:

Dagger with a note stabbed in is a bit overplayed, nice touch regardless. The note is a quest item so would need to be removed anyway. Probably just remove the note & dagger.
rugs with tassles such as furn_de_rug_big_06 should be sunk so the tassles rest on the ground.
ingred_bread_01_UNI3 is a quest item, replace with normal bread.
The pillow could be sunk a little more

ₒₕ, bₒₒ𝒹?

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Was finally able to get back to fixing up the showcase, hopefully well enough this time around!
Absolutely appreciated the revew!

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Bleeding:
misc_com_wood_spoon_01 in bowl
Misc_SoulGem_Lesser - the one resting on the other


floating:
steel axe - larger head should make contact with wall
Misc_SoulGem_Lesser - one resting down should rest on flat plane of gem not pointed part

Other:
unstab dagger

please also use flattened furnP rather than de_p when available. you are using a wonky de_p bookshelf. don't correct it for this int tho, just do so in future
com candles can be okay espesh if outlander inhabitant, but generally a dunmer int will use de_candles not the iron com ones - no change needed here tho

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Should be the final update for the showcase! (unless I messed up one of the fixes)
And yes, alternative candles would probably fit better with the Hlaalu style, but as mentioned this is the home of an outlander. And you are aboslutely right about the shelf, messed that up a bit

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Minor fix to the showcase

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Axe fix

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