LogansGun Exterior Showcase

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Here is my exterior showcase. Thanks in advance!

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Gave feedback in DMs

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Made adjustments, fixes, and additions based on feedback from Mojo.

- Cleaned up jagged terrain around the island

- Expanded eastern part of the island to meet 2x3 requirements (More underwater detail, shipwreck site)

- Cleaned up V-shading around the island

- Aligned dock pieces

- Made some adjustments to the eastern side of the island, including a cave entrance and stoneflower fields

- Fixed kelp tilt

- Named wilderness exterior cell

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V3 Uploaded for review.

- Smoothed underwater and island terrain

- Adjusted static placement

- Fixed placement of dock walkways

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Reviewing

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Island is looking good, I really like everything about the velothi tower island. The village looks good too
Here are the things I could find:

 

File has dirty cells on Vvardenfell (probably from copy and pasting rock assets)

File also depends on Mainland and Narsis section files, this is not necessary and needed to be cleared out before reviewing


West Gash Region -15,8

2x crate_Smuggler_01 is bleeding into the rock which has the boat shelters on it

 

 

West Gash Region -16,9

Would recommend deleting the tilted rocks by the bench at the end of the path

Don't think the ship planks would need to be there on a fairly flat path, leaving the path bare might look better honestly

terrain_rock_wg_02 underwater needs some vcol underneath it

 

 

Ald Logan -16,8

next to the redoran guard tower there are two large rocks behind the shack, would recommend deleting these and smoothing out the terrain and move the tree root so that this area looks better and is easier to walk on

recommend untilting the the two large terrain_rock_wg_09 rocks in this cell where the river enters from the sea

 

 

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Feedback applied and cleaning complete.

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Will do another review soon

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Good stuff, one reminder is to make sure you don't have file dependacies if those files are not necessary, there is a requirement for TR_Narsis for example. 
Showcase is passed and will promote you on the website here, you'll need to let someone know on discord for the promotion there.