Nectarine Juice's Interior Showcase

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Decided I wanted to try helping out for the project after playing Tamriel Rebuilt for years now. Going to take a shot at being an interior developer. Cell name is "nectarine_juice_showcase". First time using Construction Set seriously.

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Very good showcase! Solid fundamentals. There are only a couple of things I'd like to see changed before you get promoted:

  • Lighting: the light objects you placed were great and didn't cause greenlight which is a good thing. But your lighting settings (in the interior cell tab) do not meet TR standards. Refer to the hlaalu style guide for lighting standards, as well as the reason why we deviate from vanilla here: https://www.tamriel-rebuilt.org/content/hlaalu-interior-style-guide
  • Small things now, but ideally the ropes that hang lanterns and such are connected to the wooden beams rather than the stucco. The idea is that they're tied around the beams.
  • Pathgrid is good, but the one node in the middle of the stairs is unnecessary. Delete that and connect the two nodes at the top and bottom of the stair. The yellow lines bleeding through the floor is not a bad thing because the NPC following the path can still get from point A to point B unobstructed.
  • The bookshelf on the bottom floor is floating just a tad

Fix these things and I'll give you your interior badge. Your object placement was phenomenal, and your cluttering was simple but solid, with a good amount of TD items mixed in. Nice work.

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I think this should fix the issues

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With all issues fixed, promoting to interior developer