- Netch… guar… scrib…
the ellipsis in that is one of those special characters that have to be replaced when copying from special text editors, this one doesn't get displayed ingame, we just use 3 periods

- ordinator always gets capitalised, or close enough

- while in practice it almost certainly won't happen, technically TR_m4_NPC_Ibelard can be dispelled and jumpstart the journal to 40 before quest started. One way around this would be to discard the global TR_m4_Om_ReRe_HealIbe and instead use a second journal ID that has the same "Quest Name" (they'll be merged together in player journal). Another way would be for that whole event to not have started until the player hears about it, if that's compatible with the other paths, or for that miner to not have touched the bowl and gone insane until the player gets there with a started quest.

- good practice to use addtopic when any important topic could be coming up for the first time, like:
Have you heard of the cursed Indoril artifact that the Hlaalu found?
addtopic "cursed Indoril artifact"
so the topic's still learned in case the hyperlink doesn't work (not likely in that case, a mod would have to add something like "heard of the cursed Indoril" as a topic to create the issue. Even less likely in "Maybe if we all confront the foreman and tell him")

- NPCs usually shouldn't feel like talking about misc topics under 30 disposition, at least when it's not relating to a quest with them underway. Practice is inconsistently followed in vanilla so you have to judge it on a case by case basis, but for example it would be justified for the generic speaker entries on Etana Egg Mine.

- ModPCFacRep, -5, "Hlaalu"
like other negative occurences of negative reputation, this will have to be commented out until attempts to join under negative reputation are covered https://www.tamriel-rebuilt.org/claims/faction-conciliation-house-hlaalu