Andiras Interior Showcase

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Exterior: ex_hlaalu_b_07

Interior is for bottom floor and basement (not top level apartment)

Cell Name: TR_Andiras_Showcase

 

Bottom Hlaalu apartment with basement. Home to some kind of smuggler or hoodlem.

 

Thank you for taking the time to review my showcase!

 

 

Edit: Updated file since I had not saved my pathgrid :P

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Denis418
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Greetings, and thank you so much for applying. Please, take a look at the feedback below:

Name: TR_Andiras_Showcase

Clean: Yes

Esm dependencies: Ok

Light: Ambient ok, Sunlight ok, Fog shouldn't be at 0.

Pathgrid: The room with skooma could use a second node. So is the nook with a round table near the top entrance. You could also place a node in front of the bed if you scale the bed down to 0.95-0.9 and move it closer to the wall.

Northmarker: Present, correct

Gridsnap: Ok

Illegal two sleep here: Yes, correct

Fits exterior: Doesn't fit ex_hlaalu_b_07. Try another exterior shell. If nothing fits, the interior layout needs to be adjusted to fit one of them.

Floaters:

  • misc_com_wood_knife - we assume that knives' and daggers' blades are heavy, so you need to tilt them and make them touch the surface.
  • com_sack_02_thief - sacks and pillows are soft objects that have to be sunk into the floor/surface for a couple of inches.
  • com_sack_02 - same thing
  • T_Com_BrokenBottle_01 - the bottleneck should touch the floor.
  • T_Com_Lute_01 - very slightly with both ends.
  • misc_de_bowl_redware_01 on the bookshelf - it has a pointy bottom like some other vanilla items (for ex., mortar and pestle). It has to be sunk into the surface until it looks like its bottom is flat.
  • the bed is floating a couple of inches above the floor.
  • T_De_Cm_Shirt_07 - most clothing items float when in default rotation. Sink them a bit or rotate them, so all their parts sit flush with the surface.
  • chitin cuirass - doesn't sit flush on the shelf.

Bleeders:

  • furn_de_p_stool_02 on the top floor - into the base of the wall.

Rescaled miscellaneous items: None found, good.

Other:

  • This candle casts greenlight on the bottle. It happens when a light of a big magnitude is very close to something. Since the bottle is green it's not an issue, imho. Also, 64 is the smallest light. But I just wanted to inform you about this category of problems.
  • netch_leather_helm is very hard to position realistically. I either hang it on some sort of hook, or avoid placing it.
  • The bed needs a pillow. They're under Miscs.
  • Bookshelves have some empty spots. You could place vessels, sacks, more clothing, and food on them. Try some repair tools as well. Also, since you have some opened bottles, it would be good to place a couple of corks around the place too, to complete their story. They're under Miscs.
  • You can lock doors and chests if you need to. I suggest locking the skooma room door like this.

General feedback: You have a good grasp of item placement. It's just some special cases that need clarification. Your cluttering is good as well, but do not be afraid to place more clutter. It'll get easier when you'll be working with normal furniture.

Kindly fix these issues, and I'll recommend for promotion.

There is no fear in love. But perfect love drives out fear,
because fear has to do with punishment. 
The one who fears is not made perfect in love. 1 John 4:18

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Thank you for reviewing Denis!

The rest makes sense and I will start the updates, but I had a clarifying question about the fitting the exterior. As mentioned in my message, I built out for the bottom apartment+basement, and left the top apartment out of the showcase. I believe it does fit the portion I noted, but if I need to add the top apartment as well for the showcase, let me know. (Here is a video explanation with visuals, if I am not making much sense https://drive.google.com/file/d/1q4WK2jZi6XA4paIDFKqYBroMfULsu6gN/view?u...)

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Yes, I misunderstood the situation, sorry. Feel free to proceed with the current layout.

There is no fear in love. But perfect love drives out fear,
because fear has to do with punishment. 
The one who fears is not made perfect in love. 1 John 4:18