Changed the name of the inn mentioned to the correct name, and rewrote the whole line a bit, including to take into account that the inn doesn't have a door. Also added full stops to the choices ("Yes." and "No."), as that's how it's most often done.
Fixes the dialogue filtering so it's possible to get reward from Llorissa Faali. She now also returns back to the monastery if she survives the encounter. I've also removed NoLore from her and switched her TR_Map variable to Map 3. There's really no good reason for her to have TR_Map = 4, but I kept the name of the script and the name of the NPC the same for compatibility.
As per https://wiki.project-tamriel.com/wiki/Aanthirin I have swapped container flora (Gold Kanet, Stoneflower, Black Anther) to the correct equivalents (Blue Kanet, Timsa Come By, Golden/Noble Sedge). I have done this for loose ings too.