The misc quest "Drinking, Stealing, Ranting", added to Roa Dyr in the DoD release, needs some writing style fixes to reduce clunkiness -- currently, it sounds very different from the rest of the game's dialogue.

An example is provided in the screenshot below. For instance, "Imagine me doing my chores and then suddenly hearing the things that I didn't even believe an outlander tongue could utter without a stop," should be changed to something like "Imagine me doing my chores when I suddenly start hearing an endless stream of the most unholy curses -- things I didn't think even outlander tongue could utter."

Also, the name of the topic "thief's location" should be changed to "find that thief" to fit in more naturally in the quest dialogue.