Although I wrote this quest, upon replaying it more than a year later, I find some of Nalvos' dialogue to sound too contemporary. In particular, the topic "problem with the statue", there are several mentions of a "pub", which is not a word used often in TES III. It should be replaced by "tavern" or "inn". Second, after being upset that his drinking buddies aren't coming along, he asks you to get Olvys to cut off their "beer supply". This being Morrowind, "beer" should be replaced by "shein" or "sujamma" or whatever else is more appropriate.

Edit: "pub" is fine.