OE Dialogue: Hammerfell Mission

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Dialogue claim for the NPCs in the Hammerfell Mission.

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Hi. Have you been a TR

Atrayonis's picture

Hi. Mort just told me about you. Welcome to TR!

 

Normally, we require people to have submitted and finished a showcase before we give them developer status and let them work on claims. No problem though - as mort said, this can be your showcase and we can promote you afterwards so working on other claims can be smoother in the future. For now, I'd suggest when you made a dialogue list or esp to make a showcase topic in the forum and refer to this claim, you can attach files there (as a developer, you will be able to directly edit the claims you have).

You could also check out the handbook for a few pointers in regards for Greetings.

Implemented a couple of

NoMan's picture

Implemented a couple of changes suggested by Mort

  • Changed one semicolon to a comma
  • Changed some dialog to sound a bit less "Imperial"

Update from Infragris,

Atrayonis's picture

Update from Infragris, following a Discord discussion:

Update on the Hammerfell thing: I've changed both Crowns to come from Hegathe, the old capital. Added a new "Hegathe" topic, and repurposed the Sentinel topic to say something vague about Lhotun. The Lhotunics are not named as such, merely alluded to. I also fixed some spelling errors and tweaked sentence structures, because I can't keep my dirty hands off anything

 

I also added one small nuance to the Crowns claiming to be "true Yokudans" - as per the game Redguard, both Crown and Forebears actually look down on modern-day Yokudans. The guard makes a vague allusion to this.