Dondril - Dialogue

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Dialogue for Dondril – Progress can be followed in the link below:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/15AuX4D7FZ6kcGQ-Zcje8stEXbw9wogzOrfafiCIcnWI/edit?usp=sharing

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I would merge the last two

Terrifying Daedric Foe's picture

I would merge the last two sentences of the Hadrumnibibi rumour to say: “The hetman is looking to ask our lord’s guards to burn them out, but the witchhunter Galor Sothro is talking about scouting out the old shrine himself.”

Would people refer to themselves as ”peasants”? Perhaps ”common folk” instead?

Up for claiming, NPCing for

Rot's picture

Up for claiming,
Finish Dondril NPCing for this section file.
The document linked with existing dialogue work is still up:

 

You can't delete dialogue or edit/delete/move cell objects in a plugin, so reuse existing dialogue entries when possible. For merging notes:
- mark any dialogue that need to be removed
- mention any necessary changes to cell objects, cell names or ownerships
- any edited IDs

changes: implemented the

Mortimer's picture

changes: implemented the dialogue in the doc, pasting over the original dialogue. Added disposition checks to the friendlier dialogue as vanilla does. Placed the hetman and two new merchant npcs in the craftsmers' hall

merging notes:
no dialogue needs to be altered in the section file I don't think. feel free to correct me if it does.
Ownership: hetman's house (to hetman), craftsmers hall (half to alchemist, half to misc. merchant)

   DIAL: someone in

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 DIAL: someone in particular

missing 30 disposition

If you're looking for someone in Dondril, it's either me, or the witchhunter Galoro Sevlor.
- same ID
Between the Hetman Nalis Varo and myself, there aren't too many notable people in Dondril.
- aren't they already excluded by nolore?

There aren't a whole lot of notable people in Dondril. Hetman Nalis Varo represents us common folk to our lords of House Indoril. She doesn't take kindly to outlanders barging into her house, so don’t expect a friendly welcome. Besides her, there’s the village witchhunter, Galoro Sevlor and the village smith, Fothras Vorom.
- "She" "her" but the NPC is not female
- Galoro Sevlor,

 DIAL: little advice

Looking for a route into the east, outlander? You’d best avoid taking the road east of here into the Sundered Scar. I’ve heard travelers say that once you reach Id Vnas, there’s only a rough network of footpaths leading into the mires.
- "Id Vnas"?

A Temple infirmary to the north acts as a refuge for the sick and injured. Look for a Velothi tower in the wilderness, close to the Bani-dad Caldera, if you need healing.
- "Bani-dad Caldera"? that foyada is on the other side of red mountain according to uesp, should it be Nadanat?

 DIAL: background
missing 30 disposition
PCRace == 8 entry overwritten by general one

 DIAL: local area
entry sunken at bottom

 DIAL: services
You can sometimes find local craftsmen bartering wares in the village center. If you can't get ahold of what you want there, take the road south to Vhul. Its local tong
- "bartering wares in the village center" is this still true?
- "local tong" cap on Tong

 DIAL: roa dyr
missing nolore

 DIAL: dondril
As an itinerant priest of the Temple, I roamed from village to village, preaching the Tribune's sermons.
- Tribunes'
Our village rests in the eastern foothills
- overwrites the rest of the topic - there are already generic cell entries at the bottom
- "drive the slaves our lord provides us for labor" are there slaves

 NPC_: tr_m3_fothras_vorom (Fothras Vorom)
is there any metal armor of a more DE style than chainmail?

 NPC_: tr_m3_nalis_varo (Nalis Varo)
that's the robe worn by Necrom priests, not a generic white one

 NPC_: tr_m3_milendre (Milendre)
is the altmer in the hall a slave? doesn't have any restocking ingredients, does she need any

fixed all changes - next time

Mortimer's picture

fixed all changes - next time change them yourself that would be much easier :(
witchhunters line about troglodyte changed to 'pig-faced vermin' 
dondril generic line removed
id vnas line changed to 'I've heard travelers say that once you reach the mountain ridge, there’s only a rough network of footpaths leading into the mires.'

nalis varo used to be a priest, there aren't many priestly indoril robes out there but its changed to a generic expensive robe now

milendre isn't a slave, probably doesn't need restocking ingredients

As said on Discord there is a

Atrayonis's picture

As said on Discord there is a slight problem here: the Under Nest Inn no longer exists, but Bols Narvol (T_M3_Bols Narvol) who has a publican scripts not yet deleted, has unique dialogue and the Inn is referenced in Vhul dialogue.

As hashed out, The Nest had been reconceptualized as the backyard behind the Hetman's house. I've put Bols Narvol there and gave him ownership of the crates and barrels so he would sell booze and food.

However, dialogue edits need to happen both to his dialogue and to other people mentioning him. He'd also need a bed somewhere - suggestions?