Just finished the fighter's guild quest in OE called "And Ghosts, Too!" Idk if its just me but the final response you give to Nalis Varo seems worded a little awkwardly. The original response is "She drank too much velk nectar and summoned an Indoril spirit and the spirit told me she would make a great spirit channeler so I should bring her to you"

Maybe instead word it like "She drank too much velk nectar and summoned an Indoril Spirit. The spirit told me she would make a great spirit channeler and I should bring her to you."